Sun, Sand and Flowers

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The sunny pleasures of cactus blooms, brighten aged gold, and sunset rooms, Like sunbirds flitting in purple plumes, once dusk has known many perfumes. Prickly cactus blooms, orange sun gift, Also enjoyed during the dawn red shift. Denizens of golden gritty sand, hottest, creating dunes where the wind is swift.

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Alexis Y.

Date: 5/24/2023 6:15:00 PM

WoW! Evelyn, You painted a beautiful array of colors. It looks breathtaking! PS, If you are a mother, Happy belated Mother’s Day. Have a wonderful evening my friend:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/24/2023 6:39:00 PM

I am a mother of two. Thank you so much;-)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/24/2023 6:28:00 PM

Alexis, Thank you so much for your sunny remarks. I am a mother, and I appreciate the belated Mother's Day greetings very much. If you yourself are a mother, I wish you a Happy belated Mother's Day also. Hope your evening is nice, too. :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/24/2023 12:56:00 AM

so many colors and plants, i adore the texture of your poem, delicious indeed

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/24/2023 11:01:00 AM

Thank you so much, Yann.