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Sun Plumes

Sun Plumes

Wispy sun plumes
sweeps gloom away -
dawn grooms rainbows

beautythan-bauk

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Bj Legros Kelley

November 21, 2023 at 2:14 PM

Very sweet! Congratulations :)

Sam Kauffman

November 27, 2023 at 3:40 PM

So grateful for your congratulations and lovely comments! Thank you! Sending you blessings as Christmas comes upon us!

Terry Miller

November 20, 2023 at 3:49 AM

Back with congratulations.

Sam Kauffman

November 27, 2023 at 3:38 PM

Hi again! Well the cyber gnomes are at it again! Not sure how this response ended up under this poem!!! Thank you for your congratulations. Watching the autumn with clouds that looked like plumes was sheer delight and inspired these words! Cheers and blessings!

Sam Kauffman

November 20, 2023 at 10:24 AM

Thank you, Terry! Funny thing about this joyriding turkey, it didn't fall apart just slide across the kitchen floor! This story is now apart of our Thanksgiving Day urban legend! Blessings for your Thanksgiving!

Kim Rodrigues

November 17, 2023 at 8:54 PM

Pretty! Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

November 20, 2023 at 10:18 AM

Thank you so much, Kim! The autumn skies are often full of "plumes" to delight us! Blessings! Happy Thanksgiving!

William Kelii Kekaula

November 17, 2023 at 9:08 AM

A phrase that'll attract, Sam ... hoping you're not too busy still. Aloha, William

Sam Kauffman

November 17, 2023 at 1:17 PM

Aloha hoa'aloha! This was a fun adventure into something new! PS has taught me so much, expanded my knowledge of poetic forms and given me the greatest joy - reading incredible poems and finding wonderful friends who share the joys, and the struggles, of writing! Am beginning to come up for air - one day at a time! Sending you all the best, my gratitude and blessings for a Happy Thanksgiving!!

Charles Messina

November 17, 2023 at 4:13 AM

Beautifully written, Sam. Congratulations on your win! Hugs

Sam Kauffman

November 17, 2023 at 1:12 PM

Thank you so much, Charlie, not only for your placement but for introducing me to this delightful new poetry form! Have never written a Than-bauk before but it was a delightful experience! Sending you Thanksgiving blessings and my gratitude, my friend!

Andrea Dietrich

November 15, 2023 at 1:29 PM

wow, this should get a gold star!

Sam Kauffman

November 17, 2023 at 12:33 PM

Thank you my friend! Have never written a Than-bauk before but it was a joyful adventure into something new! Blessings! Happy Thanksgiving!

Terry Miller

November 15, 2023 at 9:20 AM

Good one Sam; GL in the contest, this will do well methinks

Sam Kauffman

November 17, 2023 at 12:21 PM

Thank you so much for your wonderful message, Terry! You are always so supportive! Have never tried a Than-bauk but it was fun. All the best! Blessings! Cheers!

Ink Empress

November 15, 2023 at 12:02 AM

Dear sam, be it long or short, few syllables or more, your words sparkle like beautiful stars that mesmerize us. I really love the rhymes here, your choice of words and how beautifully your words flow. Goes with beautiful too. I always fine them rainbows so fascinating and i always get excited seeing them. Beautiful sight. So i felt it when you wrote “ wispy sun plumes “ “ dawn grooms rainbows” love it! Goodluck for the contest kind soul. Keep shining always

Bill Baker

November 14, 2023 at 9:17 PM

Good, Than-Bauk poetry, Sam. Thanks for sharing your poetic gifts with us, my friend. Bill

Sam Kauffman

November 17, 2023 at 12:19 PM

Thank you so much Bill! This community of gifted poets is so unique. I have learned so much from being among you! Thank you for that blessing. Happy Thanksgiving, my friend!

Daisy Meadows

November 14, 2023 at 2:09 PM

A good description. Well done.

Sam Kauffman

November 17, 2023 at 11:57 AM

Thank you so much Jeanette! I do love rainbows and their meaning! Blessings! Happy Thanksgiving!

Silent One

November 14, 2023 at 1:47 PM

Lovely take on this form and nice idea with sun plumes.. It was like you took me there..

Sam Kauffman

November 17, 2023 at 10:06 AM

Hi SO! Thank you so much. This was inspired by watching wispy clouds that looked like feathers. Always wonderful to have a friend to share beauty with on a fall day! Thanksgiving blessings to you!

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