Sun On the Shore

Sunrise or sunset
it matters not to my soul
I still stand in awe


Entry into Raul Moreno's contest:
Seascapes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Muzzey Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 1:43 PM
A very nice haiku, you took the words right out of my mouth. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
Hilliker Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 12:38 PM
You so right. You can't really tell. Great Haiku. Good luck in Raul's contest.
Owens Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 7:17 PM
Beautiful Haiku...Enjoyed..good luck in the contest...Marty
Kendrick Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 6:33 PM
Great way to go I believe that it is the sun rising this time. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing.
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