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Sun Moon

Sun/Moon light parades through clouds heat is coming down from sky bright shine sets the day brightness lights the night shadows are cast all about stars sparkled about a day of delight closes into a night of bliss sun and moon collide For P.D's 3rd Place winner contest 4th Place Winner For Linda-Marie's "Haiku Hodgepodge..Trio Contest Written by: Carol Brown 3rd Place Winner

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Kim Merryman

Date: 3/10/2012 11:58:00 AM

Great trio of haiku, Carol! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 3/8/2012 7:43:00 AM

loved the end line.............congrats on the placement............~sashi

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/8/2012 6:21:00 AM

Hi there, Carol! I remember this contest so well and this was a rockin' entry! This contest actually helped poets create lil mini masterpieces with great images just like this one! Glad it won AGAIN!...son and moon colliding is a result of our Creator's great magical wand! The Spring is bursting with tons of great images similar to your haiku! Love, GWendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/7/2012 9:03:00 PM

congrats Carol on this double winning poem for PD's #3 contest winners.. loved it then.. luv it now ..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/7/2012 5:56:00 PM

One never tires of tales of moonlight! Congrad's On Your win! Light & Love

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 3/7/2012 11:53:00 AM

Congrats Carol...superb win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2012 10:49:00 AM

Thank you for the placement in your contest P.D. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/7/2012 10:06:00 AM

CAROL~.Congratulations! THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/5/2012 5:05:00 AM

Carol, Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe

George Aul

Date: 2/1/2012 3:50:00 PM

Congrats with a great poem......George

Spandan Karmakar

Date: 2/1/2012 2:05:00 AM

Congrats on your win Carol

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/31/2012 2:17:00 PM

Nice set of haikus, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/31/2012 8:49:00 AM

just beautiful, congrats on your win Carol

David Williams

Date: 1/31/2012 1:01:00 AM

Carol congrats on your win, love them but I hope they never collide.David

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/30/2012 8:37:00 PM

Many congratulation on your win, loved and enjoyed, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2012 3:55:00 PM

wow, I really enjoyed that last one where sun and moon collide, and that's when we see such gorgeous colors! Congrats on a well deserved win, Carol.

Jon Arno

Date: 1/30/2012 1:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful write, Jon

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/30/2012 1:53:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2012 1:23:00 PM

congrats Carol on sweet success in my Haiku contest.. excellent entry and thankxxx...luv..

Maxeen Dennis

Date: 1/30/2012 8:53:00 AM

I love this poem!

Abhinav Guha

Date: 1/30/2012 12:13:00 AM

Very nice work Carol. Keep it up! Love, Abhinav.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 1/29/2012 11:16:00 AM

Beautiful, Carol. Thanks for stopping by and your comment always appreciated :)

Glenn Mccrary

Date: 1/29/2012 3:02:00 AM

Nice work Carol :)

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 1/28/2012 2:33:00 AM

Wow. Very nice. I really liked the way you incorporated the stars and a tiny little hint of dusk thrown in. Good Job and good luck. S.R

Erich Goller

Date: 1/27/2012 12:58:00 PM

Beautiful nature, beautiful Haiku trio,I enjoyed reading it, God bless you' Hugs!Erich P.S. I have a question, maybe you can help me there, I like to center some of my poems but I don't know how, I send an email to Poetry Soup about it,but they did not respond. I noticed you enter each of your poem into a contest, how con I do that? Thank you. Hugs!Erich