Carol Sunshine Brown Poet Haiku

Sun Moon

Sun/Moon

light parades through clouds
heat is coming down from sky
bright shine sets the day

brightness lights the night
shadows are cast all about
stars sparkled about

a day of delight
closes into a night of bliss
sun and moon collide

 For P.D's 3rd Place winner contest
4th Place Winner


For Linda-Marie's "Haiku Hodgepodge..Trio Contest
Written by: Carol Brown
3rd Place Winner

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Kim Merryman March 10, 2012 at 11:58 AM Great trio of haiku, Carol! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Sashi Prabhu March 8, 2012 at 7:43 AM loved the end line.............congrats on the placement............~sashi

Gwendolen Song March 8, 2012 at 6:21 AM Hi there, Carol! I remember this contest so well and this was a rockin' entry! This contest actually helped poets create lil mini masterpieces with great images just like this one! Glad it won AGAIN!...son and moon colliding is a result of our Creator's great magical wand! The Spring is bursting with tons of great images similar to your haiku! Love, GWendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 7, 2012 at 9:03 PM congrats Carol on this double winning poem for PD's #3 contest winners.. loved it then.. luv it now ..

Debbie Guzzi March 7, 2012 at 5:56 PM One never tires of tales of moonlight! Congrad's On Your win! Light & Love

Jonas L. Rozario March 7, 2012 at 11:53 AM Congrats Carol...superb win.

Carol Sunshine Brown March 7, 2012 at 10:49 AM Thank you for the placement in your contest P.D. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A March 7, 2012 at 10:06 AM CAROL~.Congratulations! THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Samual Ronthorpe February 5, 2012 at 5:05 AM Carol, Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe

George Aul February 1, 2012 at 3:50 PM Congrats with a great poem......George

Spandan Karmakar February 1, 2012 at 2:05 AM Congrats on your win Carol

Kim Merryman January 31, 2012 at 2:17 PM Nice set of haikus, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Francine Roberts January 31, 2012 at 8:49 AM just beautiful, congrats on your win Carol

David Williams January 31, 2012 at 1:01 AM Carol congrats on your win, love them but I hope they never collide.David

Bl Devnath January 30, 2012 at 8:37 PM Many congratulation on your win, loved and enjoyed, bl

Andrea Dietrich January 30, 2012 at 3:55 PM wow, I really enjoyed that last one where sun and moon collide, and that's when we see such gorgeous colors! Congrats on a well deserved win, Carol.

Jon Arno January 30, 2012 at 1:59 PM Congratulations on your wonderful write, Jon

Carol Sunshine Brown January 30, 2012 at 1:53 PM Thank you for my placement Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 30, 2012 at 1:23 PM congrats Carol on sweet success in my Haiku contest.. excellent entry and thankxxx...luv..

Maxeen Dennis January 30, 2012 at 8:53 AM I love this poem!

Abhinav Guha January 30, 2012 at 12:13 AM Very nice work Carol. Keep it up! Love, Abhinav.

Dinda Minardi January 29, 2012 at 11:16 AM Beautiful, Carol. Thanks for stopping by and your comment always appreciated :)

Glenn Mccrary January 29, 2012 at 3:02 AM Nice work Carol :)

Samual Ronthorpe January 28, 2012 at 2:33 AM Wow. Very nice. I really liked the way you incorporated the stars and a tiny little hint of dusk thrown in. Good Job and good luck. S.R

Erich Goller January 27, 2012 at 12:58 PM Beautiful nature, beautiful Haiku trio,I enjoyed reading it, God bless you' Hugs!Erich P.S. I have a question, maybe you can help me there, I like to center some of my poems but I don't know how, I send an email to Poetry Soup about it,but they did not respond. I noticed you enter each of your poem into a contest, how con I do that? Thank you. Hugs!Erich

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