Sun Moon

Sun/Moon
light parades through clouds
heat is coming down from sky
bright shine sets the day
brightness lights the night
shadows are cast all about
stars sparkled about
a day of delight
closes into a night of bliss
sun and moon collide
For P.D's 3rd Place winner contest 4th Place Winner For Linda-Marie's "Haiku Hodgepodge..Trio Contest Written by: Carol Brown 3rd Place Winner

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Date: 3/10/2012 11:58:00 AM
Great trio of haiku, Carol! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/8/2012 7:43:00 AM
loved the end line.............congrats on the placement............~sashi
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Date: 3/8/2012 6:21:00 AM
Hi there, Carol! I remember this contest so well and this was a rockin' entry! This contest actually helped poets create lil mini masterpieces with great images just like this one! Glad it won AGAIN!...son and moon colliding is a result of our Creator's great magical wand! The Spring is bursting with tons of great images similar to your haiku! Love, GWendolen
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Date: 3/7/2012 9:03:00 PM
congrats Carol on this double winning poem for PD's #3 contest winners.. loved it then.. luv it now ..
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Date: 3/7/2012 5:56:00 PM
One never tires of tales of moonlight! Congrad's On Your win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/7/2012 11:53:00 AM
Congrats Carol...superb win.
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:49:00 AM
Thank you for the placement in your contest P.D. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:06:00 AM
CAROL~.Congratulations! THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 2/5/2012 5:05:00 AM
Carol, Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/1/2012 3:50:00 PM
Congrats with a great poem......George
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Date: 2/1/2012 2:05:00 AM
Congrats on your win Carol
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Date: 1/31/2012 2:17:00 PM
Nice set of haikus, Carol. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/31/2012 8:49:00 AM
just beautiful, congrats on your win Carol
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:01:00 AM
Carol congrats on your win, love them but I hope they never collide.David
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Date: 1/30/2012 8:37:00 PM
Many congratulation on your win, loved and enjoyed, bl
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:55:00 PM
wow, I really enjoyed that last one where sun and moon collide, and that's when we see such gorgeous colors! Congrats on a well deserved win, Carol.
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Date: 1/30/2012 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful write, Jon
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Date: 1/30/2012 1:53:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/30/2012 1:23:00 PM
congrats Carol on sweet success in my Haiku contest.. excellent entry and thankxxx...luv..
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Date: 1/30/2012 8:53:00 AM
I love this poem!
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Date: 1/30/2012 12:13:00 AM
Very nice work Carol. Keep it up! Love, Abhinav.
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Date: 1/29/2012 11:16:00 AM
Beautiful, Carol. Thanks for stopping by and your comment always appreciated :)
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Date: 1/29/2012 3:02:00 AM
Nice work Carol :)
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Date: 1/28/2012 2:33:00 AM
Wow. Very nice. I really liked the way you incorporated the stars and a tiny little hint of dusk thrown in. Good Job and good luck. S.R
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Date: 1/27/2012 12:58:00 PM
Beautiful nature, beautiful Haiku trio,I enjoyed reading it, God bless you' Hugs!Erich P.S. I have a question, maybe you can help me there, I like to center some of my poems but I don't know how, I send an email to Poetry Soup about it,but they did not respond. I noticed you enter each of your poem into a contest, how con I do that? Thank you. Hugs!Erich
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