Sun Moon

Sun shining brightly
like golden ring in blue sky...
spectacular scene

the moon shines in night
like a crown made of diamond...
sky is nature's queen

the sun and the moon
both makes the earth beautiful...
her two ornaments



By:spandan karmakar

Date:23rd Jan 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 29, 2014 at 6:03 PM
Spandan... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA
Chircop Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 12:50 AM
you definitely have a great teacher to write such awesome haiku-Lovely
Guzzi Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 6:47 PM
very good connecting of lines 1 & 2!!! excellent imagery now ask Da's help on the 3rd lines BOY we all have trouble with those 3rd lines..remember no fantasy no imagination only what you actually see, smell, taste or touch..if you were IN the scene. Light & Love Debi
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 5:04 AM
Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe
Karmakar Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 1:57 AM
Thanks for your comments Samual
Merryman Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 2:13 PM
Well done, Spandan. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Karmakar Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 2:00 AM
Thanks Kim for your comments
Roberts Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 8:47 AM
beautifully done, congrats on your win in the contest
Karmakar Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 2:02 AM
Thanks Francine for your comments
Onclaud Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 9:09 PM
SPAN.. sweet congrats to you; i knew you will do well! shine on!..:) huggs!
Song Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 6:25 PM
who just called me a Mother Hen?....lol.
Song Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 6:24 PM
Now remember the agreement, Span...I represent you and u send me all the cash prizes!!! ha ha..I will Soup Mail you my address for the Swiss Bank account! :) I am so proud of your success in your first haiku contest. Got a secret for ya too,....Linda Marie is a phenomenal poet and she knows what great poetry is..consider yourself ONE FINE YOUNG POET NOW!! A standing ovation for you, son. APPLAUSE!!! Gwendolen ps..did u get your homework done? Always get that out of the way first....this poetry stuff is addictive. :)
Williams Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 4:30 PM
spandan, congrats on your win, welcome to the soup..David
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 3:54 PM
Hey, was this one of your first contests, Spandan?
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 3:51 PM
Way to go in the winners' circle. a Big congrats to you. Great symbolic poem!!
Arno Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 1:59 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful write, Jon
Brown Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Spandan. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 1:20 PM
congrats on success in my contest spandan.. enjoyed entry..thankxxx..luv..
Poet Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 1:10 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Northeast Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 10:05 PM
Wonderful haiku Spandan, Blessings, bren : )
Song Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 5:22 AM
You gave the sky a feminine glow with this ornate ring and crown, Spandan. I am so thrilled for this most successful write...you nailed the theme of the contest to a T. Executing a strong haiku is like a gymnast perfecting her dismount! A solid landing! Gwendolen
Onclaud Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 1:05 AM
i am getting more fond of you from the outside looking in, span... delicately woven piece worthy of a win... please join the contest... goood stuff!..:) hugggs!
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 11:07 PM
You have a great poetic life ahead of you writing like this, Spandan. VERY nice.
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