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Sun Moon

Sun shining brightly
like golden ring in blue sky...
spectacular scene

the moon shines in night
like a crown made of diamond...
sky is nature's queen

the sun and the moon
both makes the earth beautiful...
her two ornaments



By:spandan karmakar

Date:23rd Jan 2012

Copyright © Spandan Karmakar | Year Posted 2012

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/29/2014 6:03:00 PM Spandan... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 3/11/2012 12:50:00 AM you definitely have a great teacher to write such awesome haiku-Lovely Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/21/2012 6:47:00 PM very good connecting of lines 1 & 2!!! excellent imagery now ask Da's help on the 3rd lines BOY we all have trouble with those 3rd lines..remember no fantasy no imagination only what you actually see, smell, taste or touch..if you were IN the scene. Light & Love Debi Login to Reply

Samual Ronthorpe Date: 2/5/2012 5:04:00 AM Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe Login to Reply Spandan Karmakar Date: 2/9/2012 1:57:00 AM Thanks for your comments Samual

Kim Merryman Date: 1/31/2012 2:13:00 PM Well done, Spandan. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Login to Reply Spandan Karmakar Date: 2/9/2012 2:00:00 AM Thanks Kim for your comments

Francine Roberts Date: 1/31/2012 8:47:00 AM beautifully done, congrats on your win in the contest Login to Reply Spandan Karmakar Date: 2/9/2012 2:02:00 AM Thanks Francine for your comments

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/30/2012 9:09:00 PM SPAN.. sweet congrats to you; i knew you will do well! shine on!..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 1/30/2012 6:25:00 PM who just called me a Mother Hen?....lol. Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 1/30/2012 6:24:00 PM Now remember the agreement, Span...I represent you and u send me all the cash prizes!!! ha ha..I will Soup Mail you my address for the Swiss Bank account! :) I am so proud of your success in your first haiku contest. Got a secret for ya too,....Linda Marie is a phenomenal poet and she knows what great poetry is..consider yourself ONE FINE YOUNG POET NOW!! A standing ovation for you, son. APPLAUSE!!! Gwendolen ps..did u get your homework done? Always get that out of the way first....this poetry stuff is addictive. :) Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 1/30/2012 4:30:00 PM spandan, congrats on your win, welcome to the soup..David Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/30/2012 3:54:00 PM Hey, was this one of your first contests, Spandan? Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/30/2012 3:51:00 PM Way to go in the winners' circle. a Big congrats to you. Great symbolic poem!! Login to Reply

Jon Arno Date: 1/30/2012 1:59:00 PM Congratulations on your wonderful write, Jon Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/30/2012 1:52:00 PM Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Spandan. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/30/2012 1:20:00 PM congrats on success in my contest spandan.. enjoyed entry..thankxxx..luv.. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 1/30/2012 1:10:00 PM CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Login to Reply

Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/25/2012 10:05:00 PM Wonderful haiku Spandan, Blessings, bren : ) Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 1/25/2012 5:22:00 AM You gave the sky a feminine glow with this ornate ring and crown, Spandan. I am so thrilled for this most successful write...you nailed the theme of the contest to a T. Executing a strong haiku is like a gymnast perfecting her dismount! A solid landing! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/25/2012 1:05:00 AM i am getting more fond of you from the outside looking in, span... delicately woven piece worthy of a win... please join the contest... goood stuff!..:) hugggs! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/24/2012 11:07:00 PM You have a great poetic life ahead of you writing like this, Spandan. VERY nice. Login to Reply