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Sun Inspires

ultramarine unfathomable sky, with a hue of gorgeous crimson from the east, 
                 sometimes just hint of a dazzling mystifying dot, 
        a red dot on the forehead of an enchanting woman from the orient, 
          then it grows larger and larger, enveloping the ruby-red horizon, 
                      a few white pristine clouds floating carefree, 
                  bringing tangerine dreams from the yonder hills
our omnipotent creator has announced his grand arrival, but hasn't arrived yet.
                                    moment of realization - 
              the world wouldn’t be same without me, and without you. 



           some days, it's still unilluminated and unusually mysterious, 
                   awed, I gaze at the neon canvas from my bed, 
                                      stars still blinking, 
                 dark sky studded with millions of them glistening, 
                         each one has a poignant story to tell, 
                    very strangely a full moon, round and silvery, 
                                    refuses to disappear, 
                   although her powerful contender is about to rise.

                                       

                                        I am mesmerized!
               I feel a gush of lavender emotions run through my veins, 
                     to describe this indescribable kaleidoscopic sight 
                        in words feels like the most daunting task, 
                                           sun at dawn…
       the cooing melody of birds serenading me to a forest of lilac dreams, 
                the soaring symphony of chimes from a temple far away, 
            humming melody of a stream descending from a mountaintop…
                  I find a purpose which ignites my saffron imagination 
                         spread its wings and rise to the horizon 



                                          July 22, 2021
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Buehler Avatar
July 24, 2021 at 4:34 PM
I was rapt reading this beautiful creation, Mala. Your imagery is a delight. The picture is wonderful, too. This is a fave. Blessings, Evelyn :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 24, 2021 at 4:46 PM
Thanks so much, Evelyn. Glad you enjoyed it. Sun is our inspiration.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 23, 2021 at 1:18 PM
Hello Mala, I enjoy to watch the sunset. I can watch it for hours. if i am by the water, i can stay there for hours watching the sunset over the water. Love & Friendship. Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 24, 2021 at 10:29 AM
Hello Mala, I love them both. Friendship & Love, Darlene
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 23, 2021 at 7:36 PM
Thanks, Darlene. Sunset and Sunrise, for me, are Nature's most beautiful gifts. Love and Friendship ~ Mala
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 7:30 PM
Simply awesome! Beautiful!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 7:41 PM
Dear Rama, I am really inspired with your encouraging words. Love ~ Mala
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