Sun In - Sun Out

Extreme Sunset


Brimstones past the clouds 
Highlight against the ocean line
Beautiful sunset, warm texture
Warning, the rooster's asleep!

Glorious yellow and orange mixture 
My source of great inspiration
Unmatch - beauty mark In the sky
The horizon is ready for nightfall 


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Smith Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 5:17 PM
I admire anyone who can describe something a new way that is unique to them. Regards David from NZ
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 4:10 PM
Another one that I really like, Skat. I wonder if there are some of these I have seen more than three times now!
Comet Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 2:26 PM
Really short and sweet. You made a great mental picture here with nice word choices. Thanks for this read.
Lindley Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 8:20 PM
I saw this as a winner before reading comments below congratulating you on it winning! A7 and awesome deep and creative poetry.
Holliday  Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 9:11 AM
Amazing imagery.. Love it!
Hopper Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 1:38 PM
Lovely image in my head
Beesley Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 6:06 PM
Brimstone and a burning wind
Sietesantos Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 3:53 PM
SKAT A, I love the element of surprise in the last line of each verse! Very awesome piece with blazing imagery! Pandita.
Jimmy Boom Semtex Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 2:11 AM
nice. many images from nature and the sky come to mind here. :)
Dunn Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 9:14 PM
Beautiful my dearest girl, love how light this is i'm thinking I need to do something light and easy such as you've done here. I wonder what you have inspired tonight lol one never knows dearest of hearts where this may lead me. But it would have started by your muse above. cheri
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 5:44 PM
skat you should rework this one somehow for the red moon contest I still love it.
Callus Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 2:54 AM
Hi Skat...stopped here to read one of your poems in exchange for Dracula visit!!:) (only following sis's instructions!!) Glad I did though...the imagery here is great...so is the whole write :) cu // paul
A  Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 10:31 PM
THANK YOU ANDREA :) SKAT
A   Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 9:53 PM
hot win... linda
Andresen Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 1:40 PM
- Congratulations on your win in: "Itty Bitty" contest, Skat !! (My poem was so itty bitty that it dropped out of the contest :))) - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 8:41 AM
Congrats on your win Skat
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 10:50 PM
this was very nice, Skat. Like I told Tim, I put the good ones that forgot to put itty bitty in the title line down here. Others did not make the list at all. congrats in my contest. Your poem rocked.
Goswami Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 10:32 AM
Beautiful...I saw it on the coast of Bay of Bengal...Best wishes from India...
Fabre Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 1:36 PM
Hey Kat, this is subway67. I'm not too familiar with how this site works, so I'm sending you a message via comments. Thanks for your comment and friendly, warm welcome to poetrysoup. I will have to figure this site out. Red Sun is very liberating. Let myself float away with it. Thanks again for your post.
Rogers Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 7:04 AM
Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice imagery...Where is this place SKAT, I'd love to take my "Valentine" there and picnic 'tll this glorious sunrise...smile, Robert
Beloved Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 4:30 PM
Love the imagery here :) the yellows...oranges...soft reds...marvelous really ~ Sam
Peterson Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 7:14 PM
Just got around to reading this and was blessed by its great beauty. Thanks for arranging the words in such a pleasing way.
Mohammed Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 9:12 AM
Excellent imagery here. Your poem is an utter delight to peruse. Love...Mustapha.
Jackson Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 8:18 PM
I can see the red sky. Beautiful poem. Best wishes Linda x
Franks Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 9:55 AM
totally gifted xoxo
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