Kim Rodrigues Poet Tyburn

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Sun Day

SUN DAY

                                               Ocean
                                                Tide’s fun
                                                  Bold sun
                                                   Red nun

Jet ski flies o’er ocean, tide’s fun splash
All day affair - bold sun, red nun thrash

4/9/2017
Tyburn Form

*nun – cone-shaped buoy

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Roy Pett March 15, 2017 at 3:38 PM Wonderful Tyburn Kim, great theme, really like, Roy. :) Kim Rodrigues March 15, 2017 at 4:40 PM Thank you, Roy!

Maurice Yvonne March 14, 2017 at 7:14 PM Another great write. Lots Of Love armand. Kim Rodrigues March 14, 2017 at 8:05 PM Thanks so much, Armand!!

Judy Ball March 14, 2017 at 5:14 PM I really like this. It brings back memories of the beach and fun in the sun. Great job. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB Kim Rodrigues March 14, 2017 at 6:53 PM Thanks somuch, Judy! I love the beach!