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Sun Beams On Water

sun beams on water
glows within the rising mist…
golden bars wafting

Russell Sivey

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Pandita Sietesantos

September 14, 2014 at 8:04 PM

Beautiful, magical haiku! Excellent piece! Pandita

Jslambert Mister Roboto

July 31, 2014 at 9:07 AM

Yesterday was a magical day here on the soup. First I read you, BACK again...Then like magic, Moments after I mentioned Chris A., he REAPPEARS! So, what I need to do is catch up on some writes. I do love the pristine energy of golden bars.

Skat A

March 20, 2014 at 2:42 PM

a golden haiku ~SKAT~

Jack Horne

March 17, 2014 at 12:14 PM

can picture this perfectly - lovely

Poet Tacito

March 17, 2014 at 8:36 AM

YES! Especially by the beach or lake! I want to be there! Fantastic job!

Len Gasun

March 17, 2014 at 2:57 AM

You've painted a magnificent image through your excellent Haiku my very dear friend Russell! Sun is my muse and I extremely love your poem. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a nice wkend to you and your loved ones/family! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Nette Onclaud

March 16, 2014 at 5:01 PM

such a glimmering 'ku, russell.. i like the ahha moment in your last line.. a gold this is... awesome!.. huggs

Jan Allison

March 16, 2014 at 4:02 PM

this paints a beautiful picture. Jan x

Andrea Dietrich

March 16, 2014 at 12:43 PM

this is beautiful, russell

Paul Callus

March 16, 2014 at 10:22 AM

beautiful haiku...awesome imagery. // paul

Tim Smith

March 16, 2014 at 9:56 AM

This is beautiful Russell. It reminds me of a peaceful morning on a lake watching the sun rise...Kudos Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 16, 2014 at 8:33 AM

- A beautiful picture, Russell! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

March 16, 2014 at 8:02 AM

Russell, this is lovely, it makes me think of the coming of Spring, although here in my part of Canada we are still locked in the deep freeze. Well Done. Constance