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Sun Beams On Water

sun beams on water
glows within the rising mist…
golden bars wafting

Russell Sivey

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/14/2014 8:04:00 PM

Beautiful, magical haiku! Excellent piece! Pandita

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/31/2014 9:07:00 AM

Yesterday was a magical day here on the soup. First I read you, BACK again...Then like magic, Moments after I mentioned Chris A., he REAPPEARS! So, what I need to do is catch up on some writes. I do love the pristine energy of golden bars.

Skat A

Date: 3/20/2014 2:42:00 PM

a golden haiku ~SKAT~

Jack Horne

Date: 3/17/2014 12:14:00 PM

can picture this perfectly - lovely

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/17/2014 8:36:00 AM

YES! Especially by the beach or lake! I want to be there! Fantastic job!

Len Gasun

Date: 3/17/2014 2:57:00 AM

You've painted a magnificent image through your excellent Haiku my very dear friend Russell! Sun is my muse and I extremely love your poem. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a nice wkend to you and your loved ones/family! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/16/2014 5:01:00 PM

such a glimmering 'ku, russell.. i like the ahha moment in your last line.. a gold this is... awesome!.. huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 3/16/2014 4:02:00 PM

this paints a beautiful picture. Jan x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/16/2014 12:43:00 PM

this is beautiful, russell

Paul Callus

Date: 3/16/2014 10:22:00 AM

beautiful haiku...awesome imagery. // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 3/16/2014 9:56:00 AM

This is beautiful Russell. It reminds me of a peaceful morning on a lake watching the sun rise...Kudos Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/16/2014 8:33:00 AM

- A beautiful picture, Russell! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 3/16/2014 8:02:00 AM

Russell, this is lovely, it makes me think of the coming of Spring, although here in my part of Canada we are still locked in the deep freeze. Well Done. Constance