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Sun Bathing

The steaming sun rays,
Beating against your green coat;
Prickly as a thorn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/27/2009 3:40:00 PM
Uh, nice verse in the end! Thanks for the image =)
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Date: 5/19/2009 4:51:00 PM
Love this, great work on your haiku.
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Date: 5/18/2009 11:17:00 PM
I think this is a great haiku, nice 5/7/5 flow. Love E.
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Date: 5/18/2009 10:25:00 PM
Prickly as a thorm, must be a cactus with its greet coat. Love the idea of it basking in the sun...Raul
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Date: 5/18/2009 3:44:00 PM
creative ...I love it. Bg
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Date: 5/18/2009 3:36:00 PM
I love reading the haiku form, I think this plant needs to find some shade, good write.
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Date: 5/18/2009 3:14:00 PM
This reminds me of the little snake we had sunbathing on our patio recently. Smiles from Lolita
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