Sun Bathing

The steaming sun rays,
Beating against your green coat;
Prickly as a thorn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Cantu Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 3:40 PM
Uh, nice verse in the end! Thanks for the image =)
Moreno Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 4:51 PM
Love this, great work on your haiku.
Neal Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 11:17 PM
I think this is a great haiku, nice 5/7/5 flow. Love E.
Moreno Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 10:25 PM
Prickly as a thorm, must be a cactus with its greet coat. Love the idea of it basking in the sun...Raul
Gorelick Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 3:44 PM
creative ...I love it. Bg
Lopez Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 3:36 PM
I love reading the haiku form, I think this plant needs to find some shade, good write.
Townsend Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 3:14 PM
This reminds me of the little snake we had sunbathing on our patio recently. Smiles from Lolita
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