Four beautiful lines. March 9Th 2025. sponsor Constance la French.
Golden rays of early light striate the heavens Slicing o’re the ocean’s white caps Illuminating the wreck of a long lost pirate ship Whose bare bones blaze, beautiful in the early light
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