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            Four beautiful lines. March 9Th 2025. sponsor Constance la French.

Golden rays of early light striate the heavens Slicing o’re the ocean’s white caps Illuminating the wreck of a long lost pirate ship Whose bare bones blaze, beautiful in the early light

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Date: 3/12/2025 8:28:00 PM
beautiful. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/12/2025 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Sun and Sea" is a beautiful write. You painted a wonderful picture. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away..................
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Margaret Foster
Date: 3/14/2025 10:14:00 PM
Thank you Paula.
Date: 3/11/2025 10:53:00 PM
This is just gorgeous. Great use of euphony. Congrats
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Margaret Foster
Date: 3/14/2025 10:13:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, struggling a bit to try and keep up with reading , writing and replying. lol. Hugs. :)

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