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Sun and Sand Minichu

Summer beneath clear sky, 
Squalling seagulls swoop to pilfer a bit of food
hurl up high. 

Boys bask with joy
in the sun breezy playful mood. 
Enjoy. 

Blue sea, 
honey-sand you'd
see.

Kites fly in open sky 
as they run in a cheerful mood. 
See!

1/12/2021

Sun And Sand Minichu Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani

1. This is a New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU (proposed by Mohan Chutani)
2. Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each)
3. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 
4. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of  stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3.
Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting.
5. Syllable count : 
Stanza 1: 6,12,3 (3 times 2,4,1)
Stanza 2: 4,8,2 ( 2 times 2,4,1)
Stanza 3: 2,4,1
Stanza 4: 6,8,1.

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Date: 2/5/2021 2:14:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Reads like a fun day. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/3/2021 7:04:00 AM
Warm honey sand sounds good right now Eve. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 2/3/2021 6:24:00 AM
Lovely ~ congrats on your win, Eve
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Date: 2/3/2021 5:17:00 AM
Lovely minichu..I like the the "kites fly in open sky". Congratulations Eve..
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Date: 2/3/2021 3:30:00 AM
Eve, thanx for participating in my contest and describing the fun filled scenes on the sea beach through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan
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Date: 1/13/2021 1:19:00 AM
A cheerful mood in a summer best. ~~
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Date: 1/12/2021 4:23:00 PM
I feel you are the mother of sons’ Eve. Lucky you and lucky them.
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2021 5:42:00 PM
Yes, mama, God blessed me with 3 sons and their wife's my daughters :)

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