Sun and Sand Minichu

Summer beneath clear sky, 
Squalling seagulls swoop to pilfer a bit of food
hurl up high. 

Boys bask with joy
in the sun breezy playful mood. 
Enjoy. 

Blue sea, 
honey-sand you'd
see.

Kites fly in open sky 
as they run in a cheerful mood. 
See!

1/12/2021

Sun And Sand Minichu Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani

1. This is a New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU (proposed by Mohan Chutani)
2. Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each)
3. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 
4. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of  stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3.
Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting.
5. Syllable count : 
Stanza 1: 6,12,3 (3 times 2,4,1)
Stanza 2: 4,8,2 ( 2 times 2,4,1)
Stanza 3: 2,4,1
Stanza 4: 6,8,1.
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Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 2:14 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Reads like a fun day. Way to go. Sara
Fowler Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 7:04 AM
Warm honey sand sounds good right now Eve. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Gauthier Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Lovely ~ congrats on your win, Eve
Brul Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 5:17 AM
Lovely minichu..I like the the "kites fly in open sky". Congratulations Eve..
Chutani Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 3:30 AM
Eve, thanx for participating in my contest and describing the fun filled scenes on the sea beach through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan
Buhagiar Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 1:19 AM
A cheerful mood in a summer best. ~~
Krutsinger Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 4:23 PM
I feel you are the mother of sons’ Eve. Lucky you and lucky them.
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 5:42 PM
Yes, mama, God blessed me with 3 sons and their wife's my daughters :)
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