Evelyn Swartz Poet Rhyme

Sun and Sand Minichu

An Aquatic Ballet
Waves cause seagulls to move in harmonic motion
Birds of Prey

Nautical Stance
Orchestrated by the ocean
They dance

The Sea
Suntan Lotion
Me

An Aquatic Ballet
Orchestrated by the ocean
Me
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01/09/2021

Written for contest, Sun and Sand Minichu
Sponser Mohan Chutani

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Sara Kendrick February 3, 2021 at 10:07 AM Creative way to go. Congrats on this winner. Sara Evelyn Swartz February 3, 2021 at 6:52 PM thank you

Linda Alice Fowler February 3, 2021 at 6:55 AM Congratulations on the win Evelyn! Love the aquatic ballet. :) Linda Evelyn Swartz February 3, 2021 at 6:53 PM thanks

Beata Agustin February 3, 2021 at 4:11 AM Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting. God bless you. Evelyn Swartz February 3, 2021 at 6:53 PM thanks I enjoy learning new forms of poetry

Mohan Chutani February 3, 2021 at 3:01 AM Evelyn, thanx for participating in my contest and creating a beautiful aquatic ballet on the sandy beach through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan Evelyn Swartz February 3, 2021 at 6:55 PM Thank you. It was very hard for me to deviate from a rhyming form and to not make the poem romantic. Thanks for the win. I am so honored.