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Sun and Sand Minichu

With sand between my toes and gulls singing a chorus on the shore near me I can doze As daylight fades I watch the sun bow to the sea in waves Wind brusque Swaying palm tree Dusk With sand between my toes I watch the sun bow to the sea Dusk January 8, 2021 Sun and sand Minichu Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2021 10:08:00 AM

Creative and descriptive work you have penned in this one.Congrats on your winner. Sara

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/3/2021 12:42:00 PM

I appreciate your kind thoughts, Sara. thank you.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/3/2021 6:56:00 AM

Truly beautiful Jenna. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/3/2021 12:42:00 PM

Thank you very sincerely, Linda.

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/3/2021 4:12:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting... God bless you.

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/3/2021 12:41:00 PM

Thanks so very much.

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/3/2021 3:05:00 AM

Jenna, thanx for participating in my contest and creating a lullaby song with gulls and waves in harmony on the beach through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/3/2021 12:41:00 PM

Mohan, thank you for the honor of placing in your contest. It was an honor to receive your award.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/12/2021 12:03:00 PM

Great imagery, Jenna, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/13/2021 4:07:00 AM

Thank you, Eve.

Mark Koplin

Date: 1/9/2021 11:20:00 AM

A beautiful scene you have set. Thumbs up Jenna!

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/9/2021 4:18:00 PM

Thank you, Mark.

John Gondolf

Date: 1/8/2021 2:47:00 PM

You do like the sand and the sea my friend. I wish I was there instead of working. Nicely done, Jenna, good luck in the contest. Hugs.

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/9/2021 4:36:00 AM

I could be in a hammock on the beach all day, all month...Just give me some shade and a drink with a little umbrella, but keep the seagulls in the distance. lol Thank you for the many times you've read my poetry and left such thoughtful comments, John.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/8/2021 1:53:00 PM

one of the best poems I've seen for the contest! gorgeous imagery and flow, well done Jenna:-) hugs jan xx i found it quite a challenge with the syllable count and rhyme yours looks so effortless:-)

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/8/2021 2:20:00 PM

Thank you. It’s easier to write than you might think.