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Sun and Sand Minichu

With sand between my toes
and gulls singing a chorus on the shore near me
I can doze

As daylight fades
I watch the sun bow to the sea
in waves 

Wind brusque
Swaying palm tree
Dusk

With sand between my toes
I watch the sun bow to the sea
Dusk


January 8, 2021
Sun and sand Minichu
Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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Sara Kendrick Date: 2/3/2021 10:08:00 AM Creative and descriptive work you have penned in this one.Congrats on your winner. Sara Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 2/3/2021 12:42:00 PM I appreciate your kind thoughts, Sara. thank you.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 2/3/2021 6:56:00 AM Truly beautiful Jenna. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 2/3/2021 12:42:00 PM Thank you very sincerely, Linda.

Beata Agustin Date: 2/3/2021 4:12:00 AM Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting... God bless you. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 2/3/2021 12:41:00 PM Thanks so very much.

Mohan Chutani Date: 2/3/2021 3:05:00 AM Jenna, thanx for participating in my contest and creating a lullaby song with gulls and waves in harmony on the beach through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 2/3/2021 12:41:00 PM Mohan, thank you for the honor of placing in your contest. It was an honor to receive your award.

Eve Roper Date: 1/12/2021 12:03:00 PM Great imagery, Jenna, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/13/2021 4:07:00 AM Thank you, Eve.

Mark Koplin Date: 1/9/2021 11:20:00 AM A beautiful scene you have set. Thumbs up Jenna! Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/9/2021 4:18:00 PM Thank you, Mark.

John Gondolf Date: 1/8/2021 2:47:00 PM You do like the sand and the sea my friend. I wish I was there instead of working. Nicely done, Jenna, good luck in the contest. Hugs. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/9/2021 4:36:00 AM I could be in a hammock on the beach all day, all month...Just give me some shade and a drink with a little umbrella, but keep the seagulls in the distance. lol Thank you for the many times you've read my poetry and left such thoughtful comments, John.

Jan Allison Date: 1/8/2021 1:53:00 PM one of the best poems I've seen for the contest! gorgeous imagery and flow, well done Jenna:-) hugs jan xx i found it quite a challenge with the syllable count and rhyme yours looks so effortless:-) Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/8/2021 2:20:00 PM Thank you. It’s easier to write than you might think.