Jenna Logan Poet Rhyme

Sun and Sand Minichu

With sand between my toes
and gulls singing a chorus on the shore near me
I can doze

As daylight fades
I watch the sun bow to the sea
in waves 

Wind brusque
Swaying palm tree
Dusk

With sand between my toes
I watch the sun bow to the sea
Dusk


January 8, 2021
Sun and sand Minichu
Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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Sara Kendrick February 3, 2021 at 10:08 AM Creative and descriptive work you have penned in this one.Congrats on your winner. Sara Jenna Logan February 3, 2021 at 12:42 PM I appreciate your kind thoughts, Sara. thank you.

Linda Alice Fowler February 3, 2021 at 6:56 AM Truly beautiful Jenna. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda Jenna Logan February 3, 2021 at 12:42 PM Thank you very sincerely, Linda.

Beata Agustin February 3, 2021 at 4:12 AM Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting... God bless you. Jenna Logan February 3, 2021 at 12:41 PM Thanks so very much.

Mohan Chutani February 3, 2021 at 3:05 AM Jenna, thanx for participating in my contest and creating a lullaby song with gulls and waves in harmony on the beach through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan Jenna Logan February 3, 2021 at 12:41 PM Mohan, thank you for the honor of placing in your contest. It was an honor to receive your award.

Eve Roper January 12, 2021 at 12:03 PM Great imagery, Jenna, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Jenna Logan January 13, 2021 at 4:07 AM Thank you, Eve.

Mark Koplin January 9, 2021 at 11:20 AM A beautiful scene you have set. Thumbs up Jenna! Jenna Logan January 9, 2021 at 4:18 PM Thank you, Mark.

John Gondolf January 8, 2021 at 2:47 PM You do like the sand and the sea my friend. I wish I was there instead of working. Nicely done, Jenna, good luck in the contest. Hugs. Jenna Logan January 9, 2021 at 4:36 AM I could be in a hammock on the beach all day, all month...Just give me some shade and a drink with a little umbrella, but keep the seagulls in the distance. lol Thank you for the many times you've read my poetry and left such thoughtful comments, John.

Jan Allison January 8, 2021 at 1:53 PM one of the best poems I've seen for the contest! gorgeous imagery and flow, well done Jenna:-) hugs jan xx i found it quite a challenge with the syllable count and rhyme yours looks so effortless:-) Jenna Logan January 8, 2021 at 2:20 PM Thank you. It’s easier to write than you might think.