Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

Sun and Sand Minichu

Walking on the warm beach
With sand between my toes and the sun overhead
Joy I reach

Shielding my eyes
I love watching the sea ahead
Tides rise

Content
Slowly I tread
Spent!

Walking on the warm beach
I love watching the sea ahead
Spent!



01.07.21

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Sara Kendrick February 3, 2021 at 10:10 AM A day at the beach does wear a body out but rejuvenates the soul. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Paula Goldsmith February 3, 2021 at 8:36 AM Congratulations on your win. Love your line, "Walking on the warm beach." Let's go..... Enjoy your win/day with blessings..................

Linda Alice Fowler February 3, 2021 at 7:21 AM Congratulations on the win Jo! Linda

Beata Agustin February 3, 2021 at 4:14 AM Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting. God bless you.

Mohan Chutani February 3, 2021 at 3:08 AM Jo, thanx for participating in my contest and creating a feeling of joy and contentment on the beach through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan

Regina Mcintosh January 7, 2021 at 3:41 AM This is lovely but I'm not sure I understand the form :) I thought of doing one for this contest but just can't seem to figure it out.. I wish you all the best. God bless you sweet friend