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Sun and Sand Minichu

Walking on the warm beach With sand between my toes and the sun overhead Joy I reach Shielding my eyes I love watching the sea ahead Tides rise Content Slowly I tread Spent! Walking on the warm beach I love watching the sea ahead Spent! 01.07.21

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2021 10:10:00 AM

A day at the beach does wear a body out but rejuvenates the soul. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/3/2021 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Love your line, "Walking on the warm beach." Let's go..... Enjoy your win/day with blessings..................

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/3/2021 7:21:00 AM

Congratulations on the win Jo! Linda

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/3/2021 4:14:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting. God bless you.

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/3/2021 3:08:00 AM

Jo, thanx for participating in my contest and creating a feeling of joy and contentment on the beach through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/7/2021 3:41:00 AM

This is lovely but I'm not sure I understand the form :) I thought of doing one for this contest but just can't seem to figure it out.. I wish you all the best. God bless you sweet friend