Sun and Fog

Sun
Sometimes
Shines brightly
After the rain 
Stops

Fog
Follows
The dampness
After the sun
Goes



3-3-19
Contest:Light Up The Page
Sponsor:Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Barden Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 10:23 PM
A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Larry - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-)
Bradfield Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 10:35 PM
I am flattered..thank you!!
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 6:39 PM
lovely contrasts and I like your use of alliteration Larry, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Bradfield Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Many thanks, Jan!
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 8:26 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem: Sun and fog, Larry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 8:50 AM
Well done :)
Bradfield Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:33 AM
Thank you, Heidi!
Gorelick Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 6:46 PM
This is great! BG
Bradfield Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:07 PM
Thanks, Barbara!
Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 2:28 PM
- A wonderful picture, Larry :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bradfield Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 2:47 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! You're very thoughtful
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