Sun and Earth
Become a
Premium Member
and post notes and photos about your poem like Sara Kendrick.

vacuous
golden sun rises
in the east
as it was
so it will be, as it goes
in designed orbit
nearer now
the earth moves to warmth
chill of night
early morn
dissipates as the earth spins
round vacuously
Vacuous--mindless
vacuously--mindlessly
not the mathematical meaning for those who understand math/science. LOL..
I know the earth spins around the sun, the earth and sun go in an orbit as they go in space. It all is so confusing. We are doing so much spinning how do we not go insane from the motion?
When I think of all of this, I think about the song "It Took A Miracle".
Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2022
Post Comments
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.
Please
Login
to post a comment