Sara Kendrick Poet Shadorma

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Sun and Earth

vacuous
golden sun rises
in the east
as it was
so it will be, as it goes
in designed orbit

nearer now
the earth moves to warmth
chill of night
early morn
dissipates as the earth spins
round vacuously    


Vacuous--mindless
vacuously--mindlessly
not the mathematical meaning for those who understand math/science. LOL..

I know the earth spins around the sun, the earth and sun go in an orbit as they go in space. It all is so confusing. We are doing so much spinning how do we not go insane from the motion? 

When I think of all of this, I think about the song "It Took A Miracle".

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Jennifer Proxenos March 25, 2022 at 12:55 PM What a creative write my friend, really mind boggling that we don't spin and fall off, would only happen I guess if an asteroid hit our planet. I remember reading about a Musical called 'Stop the world I want to get off' which played first in London and then came to America, (Broadway). Well that is not something I would ever want! hope you are well. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jack Horne March 19, 2022 at 9:31 AM I haven't come across this form before & I really enjoyed it. Yes, it makes one's head spin to think of it all Sara Kendrick March 20, 2022 at 5:36 AM Jack, Thanks for the visit and don't getting dizzy. Sara

Christuraj Alex March 18, 2022 at 10:11 PM Your poems are very beautiful. This is one of them. Congratulations! Sara Kendrick March 20, 2022 at 5:31 AM Thank you, Alex. Your visit to let me know I placed was uplifting. Sara

Sotto Poet March 18, 2022 at 10:56 AM We're destined to be together for the rest of our lives! Day and night, as well as the shifting of the seasons, are all gifts from God. Sara, you expressed it flawlessly. Sara Kendrick March 18, 2022 at 1:01 PM Thank you, Sotto. I appreciate the visit to my page. We can do right or wrong but wrong seems to win out more and more upon this earth. Sara

Vijay Pandit March 18, 2022 at 5:37 AM Together forever! The gift of day and night and the seasons. Well said Sara--miracle! Sara Kendrick March 18, 2022 at 5:40 AM Why, thank you, Vijay. The miracle of life. Your visit is inspiring. Sara