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vacuous golden sun rises in the east as it was so it will be, as it goes in designed orbit nearer now the earth moves to warmth chill of night early morn dissipates as the earth spins round vacuously
Vacuous--mindless vacuously--mindlessly not the mathematical meaning for those who understand math/science. LOL.. I know the earth spins around the sun, the earth and sun go in an orbit as they go in space. It all is so confusing. We are doing so much spinning how do we not go insane from the motion? When I think of all of this, I think about the song "It Took A Miracle".

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Date: 3/25/2022 12:55:00 PM
What a creative write my friend, really mind boggling that we don't spin and fall off, would only happen I guess if an asteroid hit our planet. I remember reading about a Musical called 'Stop the world I want to get off' which played first in London and then came to America, (Broadway). Well that is not something I would ever want! hope you are well. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/19/2022 9:31:00 AM
I haven't come across this form before & I really enjoyed it. Yes, it makes one's head spin to think of it all
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/20/2022 5:36:00 AM
Jack, Thanks for the visit and don't getting dizzy. Sara
Date: 3/18/2022 10:11:00 PM
Your poems are very beautiful. This is one of them. Congratulations!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/20/2022 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, Alex. Your visit to let me know I placed was uplifting. Sara
Date: 3/18/2022 10:56:00 AM
We're destined to be together for the rest of our lives! Day and night, as well as the shifting of the seasons, are all gifts from God. Sara, you expressed it flawlessly.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/18/2022 1:01:00 PM
Thank you, Sotto. I appreciate the visit to my page. We can do right or wrong but wrong seems to win out more and more upon this earth. Sara
Date: 3/18/2022 5:37:00 AM
Together forever! The gift of day and night and the seasons. Well said Sara--miracle!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/18/2022 5:40:00 AM
Why, thank you, Vijay. The miracle of life. Your visit is inspiring. Sara

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