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Sun

Sun is brightly shining …
Minaret echoes throughout 
haze hides verdigris

Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2013

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March 12, 2013 at 4:49 AM

This is an amazing Haiku you've penned my dear friend! I like sunshine and I like your haiku so much! Thank you for sharing! Have a wonderful day in sunshine! love and hugs, Leonora

March 12, 2013 at 5:04 PM

hmm sunshine I wish , has been snowing today lol... Thanks for stopping by....Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

March 11, 2013 at 2:18 PM

This is clever, like it gal xx

March 12, 2013 at 5:04 PM

glad you do Mandy....Seren

March 10, 2013 at 10:57 AM

Seren ...yep I can see it now...David

March 16, 2013 at 8:52 PM

Glad to hear that David ....Seren

March 9, 2013 at 3:41 PM

Beautiful Seren ....

March 11, 2013 at 2:12 PM

Thank you Donna

March 9, 2013 at 6:01 PM

Thank you Donna ...Seren

March 9, 2013 at 2:39 PM

This is such an amazing write my friend! I truly loved reading it this afternoon! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!

March 9, 2013 at 6:01 PM

Thank you Russell....Seren

March 9, 2013 at 2:22 PM

how clever is this then? amazing visual, ...Seren this is really good...

March 9, 2013 at 6:01 PM

did i do it right Harry....Seren

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 9, 2013 at 1:15 PM

I L-O-V-E the sun ! - Well done, Seren. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

March 9, 2013 at 6:02 PM

Nice to see you again Anne Lise ...Seren

March 9, 2013 at 1:12 PM

Nice work Seren

March 9, 2013 at 6:02 PM

Many thanks Raul ...Seren

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