Sun

Sun is brightly shining … Minaret echoes throughout haze hides verdigris

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Len Gasun

Date: 3/12/2013 4:49:00 AM

This is an amazing Haiku you've penned my dear friend! I like sunshine and I like your haiku so much! Thank you for sharing! Have a wonderful day in sunshine! love and hugs, Leonora

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/12/2013 5:04:00 PM

hmm sunshine I wish , has been snowing today lol... Thanks for stopping by....Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/11/2013 2:18:00 PM

This is clever, like it gal xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/12/2013 5:04:00 PM

glad you do Mandy....Seren

David Williams

Date: 3/10/2013 10:57:00 AM

Seren ...yep I can see it now...David

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/16/2013 8:52:00 PM

Glad to hear that David ....Seren

Donna Jones

Date: 3/9/2013 3:41:00 PM

Beautiful Seren ....

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/11/2013 2:12:00 PM

Thank you Donna

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/9/2013 6:01:00 PM

Thank you Donna ...Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/9/2013 2:39:00 PM

This is such an amazing write my friend! I truly loved reading it this afternoon! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/9/2013 6:01:00 PM

Thank you Russell....Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/9/2013 2:22:00 PM

how clever is this then? amazing visual, ...Seren this is really good...

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/9/2013 6:01:00 PM

did i do it right Harry....Seren

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2013 1:15:00 PM

I L-O-V-E the sun ! - Well done, Seren. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/9/2013 6:02:00 PM

Nice to see you again Anne Lise ...Seren

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/9/2013 1:12:00 PM

Nice work Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 3/9/2013 6:02:00 PM

Many thanks Raul ...Seren