Sun

Shining blanket drapes the early morning sky,
Under its glow, vibrant shadows made to flow,
New golden rise awakens a renewed hope.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 9:47 AM
I love reading your poetry! This one is a beauty! Congrats, Maclawrence!
Famuyiwa Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 10:41 AM
You are a darling Kim. Thanks for your beautiful comment.
Famuyiwa Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 10:35 AM
You are a darling Kim. Thanks for your beautiful comment.
Kendrick Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 4:19 AM
Congrats on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K
Famuyiwa Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 4:49 AM
Thanks Sara.
Godwin Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 2:09 AM
Beautiful, I know God smiled when He read it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Famuyiwa Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 4:49 AM
CayCay, this is amusing. How I wish it can really put that sweet smile on God's face. I sincerely I appreciate your comment.
Miller Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 1:15 AM
Beautiful words, congratulations
Famuyiwa Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 2:02 AM
Thanks Terry.
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