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I hear a plaintive Call: cooOOoo-woo-woo-woooo That evokes in me Extraordinary sadness Yet the sun unyielding shines.

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Date: 6/3/2010 3:28:00 AM
The lonely cry in the sun evokes a melancholy spirit for this bird, Albert. Sunshine songs should be filled with joy, so something is amiss. Quite a provocative tanka! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/2/2010 11:51:00 PM
cool write,, enjoyed
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