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Summit

Soar as high as your wings can carry you

Up, up and away to the zenith of the highest

Mountain to touch a distant dream, to touch the

Moon, or perhaps stars and constellations

In the night sky. Push your boulder of dreams up

The summit, achieving what Sisyphus could not.


BRIAN'S CHOICE P any form,any theme poetry contest
Contest Judged:  5/22/2020 (Winner: Honorable Mention)
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 
Date written and posted: 07/17/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bocsa Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 7:19 AM
Congrat. Wonderful allusion at Sisiphus mith any writer experience . You wrote memorable poems as witness of constellations. Good wings to catch the moon at first attempt to jump on the mountain.
Ibeh Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 2:13 PM
Thanks! I really appreciate the compliment, Ovidiu:-) Have a nice a day...
A  Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Edward, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
Ibeh Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Thanks, SKAT_A. Love reading your poems, too:-)
Adams Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 9:43 AM
Good Acrostic poetry is hard to write. An excellent job on this one, Edward. Good advice in an enjoyable read. It's a seven for me.
Ibeh Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 2:26 PM
I really appreciate the compliment, Cona. Thank you!
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