Notes About The Poem

Summertime - the Japanese Hotan Style

~Summertime~
(Hotan)


It's summertime again
Folks are so happy is here
Spring is really gone now
Weathers hot
Some people enjoy
Others not
Temperature soar
Time to have some fun outdoors
Or relax inside.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2010



May.18.2016




~Author's Notes:

The "Hotan", is a Japanese form, being a combination of a Haiku (hokku = ho) and a Tanka (tan).
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Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 7:44 AM
- Time to enjoy ....... time to relax .... a lovely summer poems, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 5:30 PM
Thank you ever so kindly, Anne-Lise,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate it my dear friend:))Sending you my love and prayers.Take good care now.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D
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