James Fraser Poet Haiku

Summertime Sandcastles

Summertime is here
Golden sands await the rush
Territories shared

Excitement abounds
Buckets and spades in frenzy
Silica shapes form

Children creating
Young voices resonating
Sandcastles they show

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Sara Kendrick December 7, 2010 at 3:19 PM Very creative, James. Enjoyed reading this one..Congratulations on the win...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2010 at 5:57 AM Congratulations on your win James in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich December 6, 2010 at 10:01 PM Congratulations James ,with your sweet trio of sandcastle haiku! LUv, Andrea

Kash Poet December 6, 2010 at 7:26 PM Congrats James on your win-kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 6, 2010 at 3:41 PM Congrats James on another top ten sweet victory in Irma's contest with this exceptional entry luv.. great set of Haikus...

John Freeman December 6, 2010 at 8:31 AM Congratulations James on your 9th place. Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico December 6, 2010 at 4:35 AM Congrats James!!! well deserved...

Dr.Ram Mehta December 6, 2010 at 2:21 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, James

Skat A December 5, 2010 at 9:39 PM James~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Tahera Mannan December 5, 2010 at 8:39 PM Such lovely images James. Many congratulations dear friend for this win.

C.C Bloomsfield December 5, 2010 at 7:36 AM lovely view penned in verse. .i love those buckets and spades in frenzy :)and the innocence felt through a child's palm doing those sand castles. .lovely!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 4, 2010 at 1:02 PM Very creative write James.. good luck in the contest with this rare beauty.. my entry is "Love Castles in the Sand"... a grand contest for us .... enjoyed ..happy weekend with luv..

Carrie Richards December 4, 2010 at 12:18 PM Silica shapes......wish I had thought of that one!!! LOL !! Great job, James!! :)

Francine Roberts December 4, 2010 at 12:15 PM beautiful, almost makes me feel warm ( if it wasn't freezing here)

Michael J. Falotico December 4, 2010 at 11:58 AM Nice one James... best of luck in contest...

Sharon Ruebel December 4, 2010 at 11:55 AM Hello James, Yes, this is wonderful and paints such a beautiful and fun atmosphere As Always, Shar