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Summertime Sandcastles

Summertime is here Golden sands await the rush Territories shared Excitement abounds Buckets and spades in frenzy Silica shapes form Children creating Young voices resonating Sandcastles they show

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:19:00 PM

Very creative, James. Enjoyed reading this one..Congratulations on the win...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win James in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 10:01:00 PM

Congratulations James ,with your sweet trio of sandcastle haiku! LUv, Andrea

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 7:26:00 PM

Congrats James on your win-kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:41:00 PM

Congrats James on another top ten sweet victory in Irma's contest with this exceptional entry luv.. great set of Haikus...

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations James on your 9th place. Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/6/2010 4:35:00 AM

Congrats James!!! well deserved...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:21:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, James

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:39:00 PM

James~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/5/2010 8:39:00 PM

Such lovely images James. Many congratulations dear friend for this win.

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/5/2010 7:36:00 AM

lovely view penned in verse. .i love those buckets and spades in frenzy :)and the innocence felt through a child's palm doing those sand castles. .lovely!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/4/2010 1:02:00 PM

Very creative write James.. good luck in the contest with this rare beauty.. my entry is "Love Castles in the Sand"... a grand contest for us .... enjoyed ..happy weekend with luv..