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Summertime Love

Spring blossom’s fine and fine’s monsoon season, But summertime love’s like a passing shower, E’en autumn, if my heart’s free from frisson, No, summertime love’s not my fond flower; Wearing the least or flimsiest of dress, It’s like setting the salty sea aflame, Not my scene oh, a damp flesh to caress, So, come again, time’s ripe when me to tame. O monsoon winds, rend to tatters all heat, Let summer’s rage cool, soil fragrant post-rains, Its scorching bite far off on a retreat, Ready I’m when love sings its old refrains. But, Passion, as summer time’s not for love, In cool content let’s coo under a grove! _______________________________________ 12 May 2021 Poet’s note: Summertime love, most of Indian subcontinent, where summers are extreme, is hardly a place for it. Romantic love’s fine in spring season. Monsoon maladies liltingly sing the love songs of rains. Two love birds, separated, pine for rainy togetherness. Even autumn is fine, fine is most of winter for seeking closeness and snuggly warmth under blankets and quilts. But summertime love is generally no, no here. No thanks; love of summertime is reserved for cooler climes, unless of course, one is talking about ‘Love of Summertime’!

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Date: 6/30/2021 12:27:00 PM
Hello Aniruddha, this is a beautifully done poem of summer love. Enjoy your day my friend. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 6/22/2021 6:02:00 PM
I agree with you that summer heat can be too much for summer passion. Congrats on your win, Aniruddha! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/22/2021 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win sir AP with this majestic write!
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Date: 6/21/2021 5:20:00 AM
A Beautiful Sonnet. Congratulations!
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Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 6/21/2021 9:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, I value your feedback
Date: 5/18/2021 12:00:00 PM
I get your message love and clear. Yes, sometimes summertime love can be miserable,like if you are in a super humid state, like where I used to live. Thank heavens for Air Condtioning. Very nicely and uniquely done.
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Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 5/18/2021 11:52:00 PM
When poets like you appreciate... well, big thanks
Date: 5/17/2021 6:12:00 AM
Nice one Aniruddha, blankets in summertime probably not necessary...
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Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 5/17/2021 6:32:00 AM
Thanks Charlie Smith for the feedback, but is not that reference in Poet's Note on blankets and quilts for winter? Yet every feedback is welcome... better than none, is not it? But still maybe I don't see what you do, you may let me know, I'll be obliged.

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