Summertime Bop

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Song written - 18th December 2023

Summer or Christmas Song Parody Poetry Contest

Song chosen - No.2 Jingle Bell Rock

Summertime, summertime, summertime bop Come why not to the summertime hop Movin’ n’ groovin’ dancers everywhere Wearing flowers in their hair. Summertime, summertime, summertime bop Boppin’ around the clock till one drops Swingin’ and swayin’ havin’ a great time Until midnight chimes. For young hearts it’s a brill time To bop away all day Summertime’s a dreamtime For gathering friends along the way. Boy meets girl and girl meets boy As billowin’ breeze blows Romance fills the air As the summertime flows. On your feet, to the beat, dance in the street Give it all you have got Rotate those hips, do the jive and the twist Maybe try a fox trot. For that’s summertime Yes that’s summertime That’s the summertime bop.

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Silent One

Date: 1/5/2024 1:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest with this poem that flows so well..

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/7/2024 12:22:00 AM

Thank you Silent One… Belle

Miranda Hawley

Date: 1/4/2024 8:41:00 AM

Good job and fun song. Congrats!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/7/2024 12:22:00 AM

Thank you for the placement in your contest Miranda, I enjoyed taking part…Belle

Bill Baker

Date: 12/20/2023 2:09:00 PM

Well written fun Lyric poem for the contest, Belle. Fit the music well, my friend. Good Luck! This is a FAV for my list! Hugs, Bill

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/20/2023 3:59:00 PM

Thank you poet pal Bill, comments and the fave are truly appreciated. Hugs in return, Belle

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/19/2023 6:57:00 PM

Oh wow, dear Belle, this musical poem has a unique charismatic touch and it flowed like a beautiful lyrical spell in my mind and heart.. It's so captivating and alluring! I really love that refrain as well, it creates a wonderful ambience for the reader, quite groovy with "summertime bop" Ahh, this brought a smile on my face, this morning.. A fav :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/19/2023 7:46:00 PM

Thank you so much dearest Hiya, I’m pleased you enjoyed the read and this lyrical poem put a smile on your face, you’ve brought a smile to me too. Bless you, Belle

Silent One

Date: 12/19/2023 12:27:00 PM

I really liked your refrain here that gave you poem a musical touch.. nice use of words to create a great song for summertime.. Good luck in the contest..

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/19/2023 4:27:00 PM

Thank you Silent One, I’m so pleased you like this lyrical poem. Bless you, Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/19/2023 10:02:00 AM

Belle your work is an absolute masterpiece, exuding a delightful and jubilant essence. It radiates a comforting and heartwarming sentiment, truly capturing the core of pure bliss. Good luck with the contest.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/19/2023 4:25:00 PM

Thank you so much Sotto, those words mean a lot… Belle