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Summertime Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco

18/6/24

Summertime Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco 18/6/24 ____________________________________________ feel sweltering sun beach sand and sea are fun summer has begun

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/17/2025 12:53:00 PM

All the joy!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 6/17/2025 3:13:00 PM

Hi Kim. THANKS !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/17/2025 12:41:00 PM

- Sounds like a wonderful summer :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/17/2025 11:33:00 AM

I can feel the ocean imagery, Wen. A nice rhyming haiku! Is this poem an oldi?

Speaks Volumes
Date: 6/17/2025 1:39:00 PM

Naaa cause when you guys talk about Summer I am all rugged up sitting near a heater, so I had to make one up. Must admit it did make me feel good thinking about warm sand and the feel of the sun's rays after sun block is slapped on. Take care and best wishes.

Jay Narain

Date: 6/17/2025 10:42:00 AM

right on.