Carol Mitra Poet Haiku

Summer-Tan

A sea of warm smiles
           etched on bronzed faces tilted
                                                  towards the hot sun

28.06.2021
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Contest: Summer Haiku

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Michelle Faulkner June 28, 2021 at 2:26 PM Now that more people can go out without a mask, the 'sea of warm smiles' is very welcome, and this is a very clever way to describe a tan! Carol Mitra June 28, 2021 at 9:57 PM Yes Michelle.....this is very needed....Thank you :)

Tom Cunningham June 28, 2021 at 10:21 AM I can feel the heat Carol, good luck in the contest and enjoy your week. Tom Carol Mitra June 28, 2021 at 9:55 PM Hello dear Tom....ha ha so do I thanks dear friend :)