Summerscape

A hot day in June With the falling of the night The rising full moon

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Brian Strand

Date: 7/12/2009 1:12:00 AM

Nice contrast Jim in L 3/3.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/6/2009 7:54:00 AM

Thank you for your comment on my poem. Since June has the longest day of the year and the full moon in that month fell right about that time there was a lot of light therefore night was not very distinct. Sara

Date: 7/4/2009 12:58:00 PM

Creative perspective in this concise poem. The last line gave me a sense of hope. Nice one! Thank you for your kind words on my fibonacci. I hope you are having a wonderful 4th! Karen

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/30/2009 10:41:00 AM

LOVE IT!away from the sun for the Night=)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/30/2009 10:31:00 AM

Lovely image and it has been unbelievably hot this June in N. Florida. Is it time for the rising moon? With all of the recent thunderstorms and tornadoes here, I haven't seen a clear sky. I'll be on the lookout for the welcome lifght of the full moon. Beautiful haiku, Jim. Love, Carolyn