Summer's Sun

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summer's sun floods room moose and turkey rock the shelf.... solar powered gift

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2017 7:50:00 PM

oh how fun. I think I know what this refers to. I love those things. Let me see if you are able to get a soupmail then!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/13/2017 5:05:00 AM

I have missed you here on the Soup Sara, it's nice to see a poem by you again! This Haiku is a glorious one, so beautiful in its summer fun, I can picture the moose and turkey that are on the shelf, they are the ones that bobble back and forth aren't they? I love the pumpkin head one, Halloween is coming sooner than you think!! Yes! Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/13/2017 5:45:00 AM

Russell, Yes these characters are the kind that bobble like the bobble head but the turkey moves its wings and the reindeer that I have is playing drums and it moves its front legs for it is in an upright postion..The gray days we have had slowed them down and even stopped them and they were ready to play..LOL..Your presence at my page is appreciated..Sara

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/12/2017 5:10:00 PM

This is very cute! Love it :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/13/2017 5:42:00 AM

Heidi, Thanks for the kind review..I appreciate your visit to my page..Sara