Summers Sun

Sun, 
sunshine,
sizzling rays;
so splendidly
sending us summers sensational tan.

Sunbathers swallow in the sweet sunshine;
shorts, sandals, shades,
sunblock, and 
summers
sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 11, 2011 at 6:53 AM
good morning~Edwin,., how are you? And yes this time I missed alot. I sure missed you and your poetry. the sun here in Texas... is SUN.... thanks for sharing,..p.d.
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June 25, 2011 at 2:57 PM
Perfect description of these glorious days and all the fun and ease they bring. Enjoyed! Always, Annalise
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June 16, 2011 at 6:10 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Edwin. I will be back again to read more. Hope you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 11:39 PM
i'm taken by this, edwin.. great content with alliteration to boot! winning cheers fror you :) hugggs, nette
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 5:33 PM
beautiful images with unforce alliteration, good luck in the contest, Edwin
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June 15, 2011 at 2:30 PM
warm and sunny is the forcast for this write... great poetry my friend..
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