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Summers Sun

Sun, sunshine, sizzling rays; so splendidly sending us summers sensational tan. Sunbathers swallow in the sweet sunshine; shorts, sandals, shades, sunblock, and summers sun.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2011 6:53:00 AM

good morning~Edwin,., how are you? And yes this time I missed alot. I sure missed you and your poetry. the sun here in Texas... is SUN.... thanks for sharing,..p.d.

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/25/2011 2:57:00 PM

Perfect description of these glorious days and all the fun and ease they bring. Enjoyed! Always, Annalise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/16/2011 6:10:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Edwin. I will be back again to read more. Hope you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/15/2011 11:39:00 PM

i'm taken by this, edwin.. great content with alliteration to boot! winning cheers fror you :) hugggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/15/2011 5:33:00 PM

beautiful images with unforce alliteration, good luck in the contest, Edwin

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/15/2011 2:30:00 PM

warm and sunny is the forcast for this write... great poetry my friend..