Summer's End

Autumn leaves
falling-
Summer Sun's warmth
fading
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Kiser Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 9:50 AM
It's so hard to face Autumn; here where I am, summer's just begun. It seems that Spring lasted forever and ever. We went from 60 deg nights to 89 deg nights, when the month changed. It's so bizarre.
Kimathi Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 3:53 AM
Hope you are adapting well to the seasons in your place. Btw, even the entire world has strange weather patterns these days.
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 9:23 PM
this is surely the end of summer!! yes, you should think of adding another line to it, as jan says. Let me go see your other haiku!
Kimathi Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 6:55 AM
Lol..... Also the end of two-line haiku. Third line coming up! ^_^
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:24 AM
beautiful imagery - it needs to be reclassified as i dont think it is a haiku as it only has 2 lines and needs to be 5 7 5 syllables:-) hugs jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 6:52 AM
Thanks for your advise Jan! I will look into it! ^_^
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