Summer's End

Autumn leaves
falling-
Summer Sun's warmth
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Date: 8/30/2014 9:50:00 AM
It's so hard to face Autumn; here where I am, summer's just begun. It seems that Spring lasted forever and ever. We went from 60 deg nights to 89 deg nights, when the month changed. It's so bizarre.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/2/2014 3:53:00 AM
Hope you are adapting well to the seasons in your place. Btw, even the entire world has strange weather patterns these days.
Date: 8/29/2014 9:23:00 PM
this is surely the end of summer!! yes, you should think of adding another line to it, as jan says. Let me go see your other haiku!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/30/2014 6:55:00 AM
Lol..... Also the end of two-line haiku. Third line coming up! ^_^
Date: 8/29/2014 7:24:00 AM
beautiful imagery - it needs to be reclassified as i dont think it is a haiku as it only has 2 lines and needs to be 5 7 5 syllables:-) hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/30/2014 6:52:00 AM
Thanks for your advise Jan! I will look into it! ^_^
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