Summer's Breath

A warm breeze gently lifts the white voile
I watch it dance from across the room where I lay
Half awake, and recovered from yesterday’s toil 
I’m awakened to the smell of an early summer’s day

Honey suckle makes its heightened presence known
As it thickens the air with pungent perfume
Soft, sunrays through the opened window shone 
Casting shadows of climbing ivy in costume

While a brilliant blue sky steals its golden hue
Bids me arise; take in the beauty all around
Endless sunrises and sunsets, to pursue
When again the world seems young and life more profound

I hear the ocean’s call through the wind, ’come home’
Our long-distance love affair still growing strong
It makes no difference where these feet may roam
Come summer or winter love endures it can’t be wrong
~*~
06/12/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/1/2014 4:30:00 PM
My friend, this is truly a magical write... "Honey suckle makes its heightened presence known As it thickens the air with pungent perfume Soft, sunrays through the opened window shone And cast shadows of climbing ivy in costume" BBBravoooooooo!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 7/22/2013 2:58:00 AM
To judge this artistry as a mere poem in a contest would be such a disservice. Your pure talent has been used to create such beauty... it was tremendously moving.... Jake
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/1/2014 4:32:00 PM
I too, found it to be so...
Date: 7/18/2013 10:56:00 PM
ANNALISE, you wrote a lovely summer day's poem.... congrats... SKAT
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Date: 7/15/2013 10:13:00 AM
Anna so well expressed. Congratulations on your fantastic win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/14/2013 6:00:00 PM
a nice summer day write... congrats... :-)... always & forever.... PD
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Date: 7/14/2013 4:35:00 PM
Congrats on your beautiful win. BG
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Date: 7/14/2013 11:56:00 AM
beautiful write Annalise....congrats on your win
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Date: 7/13/2013 11:36:00 PM
congrats on your 2nd place win Annalise in my "summer" contest
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Date: 6/27/2013 6:48:00 PM
This is beautifully written, great job!
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Date: 6/16/2013 9:16:00 AM
Annalise, your lines so gently drift by, making this work one to relish-- bit by bit.. so lovely!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/15/2013 11:41:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 6/15/2013 11:20:00 AM
love this, my friend - so good to see you posting
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Date: 6/14/2013 12:52:00 AM
I hope this beauty is for the summer poem contest of Francine. Very nicely done!
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Date: 6/13/2013 7:08:00 PM
A wonderful poem. I love nature and you describe it perfectly. love phyl
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Audrey Haick
Date: 6/13/2013 7:56:00 PM
Hi Phyl, Thank you for your encouraging support...I pray that all is well! Enjoy the summer! Love x
Date: 6/13/2013 2:43:00 PM
Oh this is so sweet! The absolute best time of the years! Sorry for not being around as much lately, preparing for our big move... love and big hugs, Jack xoxox
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Audrey Haick
Date: 6/13/2013 7:55:00 PM
Thank you much, dear Jack! All the best with your intended move...we just moved and it was soooo tedious, yet exciting! LOL Love and xx
Date: 6/13/2013 12:04:00 PM
An undoubtedly brilliant write. It brightens the day with beauty and ecstacy of love. Well done. Thanks for visiting my poem the Bloodshed of Mynamar,Anne. Your positive and encouraging thoughts are a solace. From time immemorial mankind is witnessing huge and monsterous shadows of the first bloodshed. May be this is the nature's idea of keeping the exploding human population under control. The mystry is known to God alone. Love. -Mohammad
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Audrey Haick
Date: 6/13/2013 7:48:00 PM
Mohammed, thank you for the encouragement and for sharinng what lays on your heart concerning your fellow man. x
Date: 6/13/2013 9:28:00 AM
An undeniable ending! Damn! Breath it in.
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Audrey Haick
Date: 6/13/2013 7:45:00 PM
: ) Thank you for your kind support, Drake. I need to visit soon.
Date: 6/13/2013 5:22:00 AM
The beauty of summer and of nature wrapped up in your brilliant verse!
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Audrey Haick
Date: 6/13/2013 7:44:00 PM
Thank you Demerius! I'm glad that you like it! Always, Annalise
Date: 6/13/2013 12:23:00 AM
You're an outstanding poet, Annalise. "climbing ivy in costume", this paints a nice picture in my head of those plants with character. Can't believe there's no other comments here yet... fantastic work!
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Audrey Haick
Date: 6/13/2013 7:42:00 PM
Thank you very much, "Little One"! : ) Hope all is well Tim. x
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