Summer-Rain

small green heads peep out
through cracks of parched desert land
when rain drops kiss ground

June 28 2021
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Proxenos Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 7:09 AM
Such a splendid piece of poetry which immediately in a few words, gives the reader a perfect image - well penned and congratulations on your win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Legros Kelley Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Joyful, I love this and can relate to it's joy! Lovely! Congratulations on your win Supraja!
Bangalee Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 1:40 AM
wonderful that is; lovely haiku
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 12:08 PM
- Congratulations on your win ~ enjoy the summer :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 8:26 PM
A great visual haiku, Supraja! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Kitchin Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 1:37 PM
Supraja, congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid haiku!
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 10:17 AM
Congrats on your summery haiku win!
Alex Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 10:00 AM
Coming back to congratulate you. Congratulations!
Shariff Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 9:37 AM
Fabulous imagery, Supraja. Very well expressed about summer-rain in few words.
Alex Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 10:51 AM
rain drops kiss ground Very natural and beautiful. Much greater in quality than my haikus. Best wishes.
Kaianah Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 2:41 PM
There is nothing better than summer rain. :) Very lovely haiku Supraja. ~Anna
Pandit Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 3:40 PM
Wonderful summer images, Supraja. All the best.
Sands Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 12:03 PM
Oh, I love this! Very nice :)
Turner Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 9:23 AM
Very well written, Supraja. Easy to connect the dots. Hoping all is well with you young lady:)
Buhagiar Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 8:27 AM
That is a scene I can easily imagine. Lovely haiku. Hugs.
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Wonderful Haiku, great imagery. Moment rain comes, brown mountains become green. Rain brings life.
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