Summerbirds

Summerbirds return
Winter has lost its icy grip
the sky is vibrating.


Barren trees are filled with life
close to the Mandau River
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Are the financial whoas hitting hard in Germany? Like in the US--Georgia has 10+ percent unemployment at present which has doubled I believe.
Chircop Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 12:23 AM
Your words are so beautiful my good friend,,on this spring morning its a pleasure to read you.sorry didnt get yourr soup m..Charma.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Vivid and Vibrant Gert and I am SOOOOO ready for this vision to manifest itself on my front porch ..after all the inches of snow and rain.. thankxxx for brightening my Friday..and for your wonderful comments too..luv..Linda-Marie
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 3:07 PM
Love this picture. Where is the Mandau river Gert? Also love the line "sky is vibrating" luv, andrea
Devonshire Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 9:30 AM
Thank you for sharing this uplifting perspective on the welcome arrival of spring, Gert. Nicely done tanka! Love, Carolyn
Murphy Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 9:19 AM
VERY NICE LOVED IT FALESHIA
Culverhouse Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 5:38 PM
pretty poem, sounds promising
Palli Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 11:09 AM
I enjoyed that, thanks
A  Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 12:01 PM
The sound of spring .I enjoyed the read on the ending of winter.. Yes I do love the spring ...
Kendrick Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Hope that it is a fact for I know that you are tiring of winter..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Richards Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Sounds serene and lovely where you are!! Spring is finally here! An uplifting poem, enjoyed! Love, Carrie
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