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Summer Yields To Fall

languished and fading
roses hang their heads in shame
whilst berries flourish


07.09.19

'A transition of seasons haiku contest' : sponsored by Tania Kitchin

Copyright © Wendy Watson | Year Posted 2019

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September 13, 2019 at 4:34 PM

The bitter-sweet contrast between summer and fall is vividly transmitted through roses and berries, Wendy. Congrats on your win. Regards // paul

September 12, 2019 at 8:25 PM

Well written Wendy ! Congratulations :)

Regina Mcintosh

September 12, 2019 at 8:05 AM

Awesomeness... I love it. Happy writing and God bless you

Connie Marcum Wong

September 11, 2019 at 10:29 PM

I love the personalization you gave this haiku Wendy. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving podium win! xxoo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 11, 2019 at 9:55 AM

Oh I love it. Congratulations on your win! xomo

September 11, 2019 at 8:37 AM

'Wendy, Congratulations on your win! "roses hanging their heads" well capture the the fall. David'

September 10, 2019 at 8:05 PM

Beautifully said, Wendy, congratulations on your win. Hugs

September 10, 2019 at 7:35 PM

Congrats on your win, Wendy. Well done.

September 10, 2019 at 6:49 PM

This a joy to read, such fabulous imagery Wendy, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

September 10, 2019 at 6:25 PM

Wendy, congratulations on your podium win with this beautiful haiku, love the imagery and the transition!

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