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Summer Yields To Fall

languished and fading roses hang their heads in shame whilst berries flourish 07.09.19 'A transition of seasons haiku contest' : sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/13/2019 4:34:00 PM

The bitter-sweet contrast between summer and fall is vividly transmitted through roses and berries, Wendy. Congrats on your win. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/12/2019 8:25:00 PM

Well written Wendy ! Congratulations :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/12/2019 8:05:00 AM

Awesomeness... I love it. Happy writing and God bless you

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/11/2019 10:29:00 PM

I love the personalization you gave this haiku Wendy. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving podium win! xxoo

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/11/2019 9:55:00 AM

Oh I love it. Congratulations on your win! xomo

David Drowley

Date: 9/11/2019 8:37:00 AM

'Wendy, Congratulations on your win! "roses hanging their heads" well capture the the fall. David'

Eve Roper

Date: 9/10/2019 8:05:00 PM

Beautifully said, Wendy, congratulations on your win. Hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/10/2019 7:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Wendy. Well done.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/10/2019 6:49:00 PM

This a joy to read, such fabulous imagery Wendy, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/10/2019 6:25:00 PM

Wendy, congratulations on your podium win with this beautiful haiku, love the imagery and the transition!