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Summer Wave

Passion Wave My tongue dares to taste Craving a cold purified ice storm, Trapped under a mountain of heat, Yearning waters to cure this excessive hot weather waste Prolonged periods that moves like a Slave Jobless and still my body resides in a frigid lake of sweat Brave to inhale and exhale the heat of this limbo loom. Summer time means nothing to the gravity around The drop of rays are killing me One to many dry spells- Worse than a bat out of hell Can you feel, what I Feel? At sea in my own body's drought. Hot spells~ Dry wells! What happen to cold spell? **CACTUS TEXAS**

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Skat A

Date: 2/4/2016 10:54:00 PM

haha love it **SKAT**

Robin Davis

Date: 3/20/2014 8:53:00 AM

PD I am sending you some of our cold and dreary weather. Hope it cools you off a little. Thanks for the great comment on my Abuse poem. Hugs

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/18/2013 3:53:00 PM

excellent poem, one of your oldies i'm enjoying here Linda,, glad i called,,, hope you o.k, watching the news today regarding the explosion.....

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/24/2011 7:06:00 AM

* "I've Got My Joyful Eyes Upon Your Amazing Beauty * Tis Just Like A HEAT WAVE * My Luv, Forever & Always * Sarah." *

Nathan D.

Date: 10/27/2011 10:11:00 AM

stupid dedication

Amy Sullivan

Date: 8/30/2011 2:56:00 PM

Hey u! I'm all good thanks and you? Really enjoyed this one! keep up your ever so brilliant work* love Amz xoxo

Jl Sadberry

Date: 8/29/2011 6:10:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “Beautiful & Precious LeeAnn *^_^* Tis Been A Moment Since My Eyes Have Been Blessed In Beholding Your Gifted & Lovely Light, My Dear *^_^* Yet As for This Summers Not So Bright Side, Brushed Straight-Up Aneath Brilliants Apex Noon *^_^* Good News, Autumns Just Around The Corner So *^_^* Out With The Jeans & Into The Bikinis We Go *^_#* Wonderful to Behold Your Beauty Again &, Stay Kool!” === My Love Unto Your Sweetheart, Always & Forever, Jasper *

Judy Ball

Date: 8/25/2011 11:01:00 PM

A great one depicting Summer in the desert. Wwe live on the plains of Alberta and it's a little better. Had lots of rain this Summer. Great job. Really good imagery. God Bless, JB

M.I.A .

Date: 8/23/2011 2:29:00 AM

Wow! This is hot indeed PD, wishing you a cool breeze for the rest of summer then ;D

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/21/2011 6:58:00 PM

Thanks for dedicating a poem to me! The "heat wave" here has broken - finally. Wish we could meet one of these days. Your poem evokes how it felt in New York several weeks ago when the mercury hit 104. Fine poetry! Love Matthew Anish

Dinda Minardi

Date: 8/21/2011 11:52:00 AM

whoow, P.D. this poem really hot. If I didn;t read the dedication note I won't know it was indeed for weather hot. Cos this poem is really sizzling, like a girl that took glance of beautiful man and lost her sanity right away. I enjoyed it! :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/20/2011 2:31:00 PM

Well i think you are "really spelling it out P D" i wish you a cooling wave to enliven your Daze..

James Peranteau

Date: 8/20/2011 12:04:00 AM

I just wrote a comment to a poet shortly ago today,....how much I appreciated her write on summer leaving !!!! Awesome write dear poet ! Linda; I'm a winter boy, and sticking to it ! Have a soon to come....cool breeeeeeze ! Much love, james

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/19/2011 11:14:00 PM

can feel the heat very well here from your lines as if what we have almost round the year is not that bad..summer in certain parts of this land could be much much worse..jag

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/19/2011 2:49:00 PM

I die thinking of the heat down there. Your hot verse brings the reality where it is felt. Great verse Linda!

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/19/2011 2:47:00 PM

Send some heat my way!!! It is cold here in Cape Town :) enjoyed this, hopefully the temps have cooled down by now ;) enjoy your weekend~ Wilma

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/19/2011 1:45:00 PM

Send us some heat we are getting colder real fast up here. Fall is almost upon us and the leaves are just starting to turn. Enjoyed the poem. love phyl

Kash Poet

Date: 8/19/2011 1:59:00 AM

Felt the heat...here in India it is monsoon time with continuous rain(and raindancing...LOL).Some states are flooded.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/18/2011 11:46:00 PM

wow know Texas set a record of the most days of over 100 degrees for over a month or more PD my BFF and I don't envy u that statistic my friend.. hope u are staying as cool as u can with Nate around..haha..Ron and I are leaving Sat. for Disney in Florida with my son and his wife and 3 grand babies..oh cannot wait.. a stunning poem on the weather but also on the heat of romance.. so happy u are enjoy the second one luv.. will keep in touch while away till after Labor Day luv.. BFF on vaca..

James Foulk

Date: 8/18/2011 10:36:00 PM

looking forward to those ice storms. it was 99 here today, this has been one long hot summer. this was a great piece you wrote.

Gary Fields

Date: 8/18/2011 10:30:00 PM

Destroyer, I am on the soup, now! I will be in the comment's area!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2011 12:46:00 PM

Very interesting given the state of the heat wave, water pouring in some places, dry in others..Very descriptive and expressive work..I feel that it is deeper than that..I haven't heard from you on the work that I souped you about..Sara

David Williams

Date: 8/18/2011 11:12:00 AM

hye p.d. this sounds really uncomfortable heat, thankfully we don't have that problem in the UK. David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2011 12:43:00 AM

Pd, unless you just barely sent it, I did not get a new soupmail from you since a few days ago, and I answered that one!! WEll, sweetie, I'm outta here. Just too much to be here. I need to lie down. haha. Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2011 12:28:00 AM

PD, my sister lives near Houston and she tells me all the time how HORRIBLE it is there this summer. You really portrayed it well. A great descriptive poem, my friend!!