Summer Vacations

Memories of my childhood often resurface, 
from the deep trenches of my mind and, 
a soul lost in the waves of day-to-day hassles, 
finds itself risen up to the realm of rejoice. 

Those summer vacations in my native place, 
memorable moments of month-long holidays, 
carefree days with nothing but play
with cousin sisters and cousin brothers. 
The long walks through the rice fields
and the vast unfenced lush green pastures, 
that led to my paternal uncle's house, 
that sits in the midst of greenery, 
holding hands following one after the other, 
with gleeful giggles and cheerful chuckles. 

A small stream to be crossed in midway, 
that had a shaky wooden bridge, 
my brothers and sisters crossed with ease, 
I got stuck in the middle of that bridge, 
my tiny legs refused to move further in fear, 
when my eldest brother lent his hand, 
to help me cross that narrow bridge. 

These are just a few moments, 
of those recollections sweet I savour. 
They help refresh my mind and raise my spirit, 
and in its warmth, I re-live my childhood. 



Original Date: 12/09/2020
Originally Submitted for: Story From Your Childhood Poetry Contest
Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins

Now Submitted for: Podium Placing Promise (7) Poetry Contest
Date: 01/12/2021
Sponsor: Brian Strand
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Wolf Avatar
January 19, 2021 at 7:48 PM
As sweet as honey are your childhood memories, Ani. Many congratulations are in order for this nostalgic write. Joy and Jubilation, Gershon
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 9:50 PM
Congratulations Ani. Beautiful write. Happy Pongal. Enjoy your day. Take care Rama
Jayasankar Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 9:56 AM
Rama thank you so much for your lovely comment. Wishing you a Happy Pongal too dear. Enjoy your day. Hugs :)
Dutta Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 8:37 PM
BIG CONTRATS to win First Place and Best wishes for next Contest. Blessings
Jayasankar Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 9:53 AM
Maam thank you so much for your congrats and blessings.. Hugs :)
Kauffman Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 11:01 AM
Ani, congratulations on your first place win. You have created a wonderful story picture with your imagery. I love the metaphoric reference when you tell of your brother lending you his hand to cross a narrow bridge. Well done!
Jayasankar Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Thank you so much Sam for the visit and the congrats. God bless. Have a blessed day :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 6:55 PM
wow, how nice this is. I don't know if it placed in the contest (mine did not, but this one sure deserved to). I have similar memories from the year my mom divorced and my sisters and I lived on her dad's farm. (corn not rice!!)
Jayasankar Avatar
December 27, 2020 at 8:06 AM
Andrea, thank you so much... am so blessed to receive such a valuable comment from YOU. But, it's ok. I just enjoy participating in contests. Wow great memories of yours... it must have been amazing.. those corn fields... truly these are the lovely memories that can never be erased. Love and hugs :)
Edmonds  Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 4:24 PM
Lovely childhood memories Anitha, I can picture the walk to your uncles house, it must have been wonderful for you all back then. Belle
Jayasankar Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 9:48 PM
Thank you dear Belle.. for the visit and comment. Have a lovely day.. Hugs :)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 11:18 PM
Such lovely memories. I envy you. At my age I'm turning senile and am forgetting things. Have a safe day. ~~
Jayasankar Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 1:59 AM
Oh Victor... I may also forget when I get old. It is quite natural. Thank you so much for the visit. You too have a safe blessed day :)
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:12 PM
- A big brother is the best we can have when you are little and scared ... a wonderful story, Ani :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Jayasankar Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 1:56 AM
Anne thank you so much dear. Yes very true... missing them all... Will mail you soon Anne... didn't get time.. Much love n hugs :)
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