Lei Strauss Poet Narrative

Summer Vacation

Bags were all packed
Wearing my black shades on
With red pants and brown shirt
I was traveling alone.

Hot wind blew
On my white forehead
Trees were swaying
I wanted to dance.

Heard the waves
Oh beautiful Boracay!
Saw astonishing glitters
Amazing white sands. 

I so felt it!
Summer was bit thrilling
Relaxing and cool
Oh summer vacation!


April 12,2015

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Poet Destroyer A May 9, 2015 at 7:46 PM Oh Yes, them summer vacations are coming soon :) Congratulations with your "Memorable Vacation win" Love LINDA

Skat A May 9, 2015 at 6:53 PM Lei, congratulations in Shadow's contest. Forever SKAT

Jan Allison May 8, 2015 at 6:23 PM sounds wonderful lei - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton May 8, 2015 at 6:15 PM very nice Lei congrats on placing hugs

Funom Makama April 14, 2015 at 10:56 AM I had to read this again to fully absorb the beauty of your lines. Your words are smooth and mental friendly. My innerself jerk to your written expressions and I just cannot stop loving this beautiful page. Definitely a 7