Get Your Premium Membership

Summer Vacation

I didn’t want to go on vacation I would rather stay home with my friends When does being treated like a baby In this family come to an end!? We went to a stupid hot beach I don’t even know how to swim I would rather be practicing basketball Back home in the high school gym. I sat moping on the beach all alone As the sun was starting to set We’d been here for all of three days I wasn’t having any fun yet. Then I noticed her walking by herself Silhouetted against the red sky Just on the edge of the water I was speechless as she passed by. I watched her walk down to the pier Where she turned and started coming back I went down to the edge of the water Making sure I would be in her path. I was aware of this beautiful creature Walking ever closer to me Her blond hair gently dancing Inspired by the ocean breeze. She looked up and smiled as she passed Slowing down for me to say, “Hi” An opportunity I couldn’t respond to As I simply let her pass by. All night I stayed awake dreaming Of this angel I saw on the shore Silently thinking and scheming What I would do if I saw her once more. Next day I was on the beach early To give my destiny a shot I sat there searching and burning The sun was so very hot. Just when I was about to give up And mope on back to my bed I heard a sweet voice saying, “Boy are you turning red.” I’ll spare you all of the detail From my steamy summer of love When on a golden ray of sunshine My future wife was sent from above.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/21/2010 9:24:00 PM
Great write, Joe. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Login to Reply
Date: 7/19/2010 7:28:00 PM
Congrats on the third place win, Joe
Login to Reply
Date: 7/19/2010 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations Joe on your well deserved win in Linda Marie's contest "Steamy Summer Love". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 7/18/2010 9:18:00 PM
Nice one Joe, warm and precious memories burned deep into our minds like these are the treasures of life, savor them for they only happen once. Congrats I enjoyed your poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/18/2010 7:40:00 PM
congratulations, if this is a true story, it sure was awesome how you met. Luv, andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 7/18/2010 7:22:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your success in my contest about Steamy Summer Love... with this wonderful write..thankxxx for supporting my contest.. my new contest will be posted today.. with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 7/13/2010 9:49:00 AM
absolutely adorable, loved it, good luck in the contest , I think this is exactly what they are looking for.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/13/2010 9:11:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Joe. It was an amazing story. I hope you do well in the contest. Love Destiny
Login to Reply
Date: 7/13/2010 8:41:00 AM
Wonderful Story Joe! I loved it!~Tirzah~
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs