Summer Vacation

Just sitting in this island paradise; the palm trees swaying in the summer breeze. With Mother Nature’s beauty so precise, I kick back to enjoy this life of ease. The pelicans are soaring overhead; I watch them as they deftly glide along, while drifting on the breeze with wings wide spread, I’m thoroughly enjoying nature’s song. The roaring of the surf against the shore, and ocean mist that’s blowing in the air, the island beauty one can not ignore; a barefoot moment in a life so fair. And while I ponder all my future chores, the tasks of life that always come our way; remembering the life on distant shores, I’ll close my eyes and think about this day.
July 4, 2018
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James Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 2:34 AM
Beautiful imagery John, sounds so relaxing and a place I would like to stay. Hugs, Emilia : )
Gondolf Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, Emilia. This really was a great vacation three summers ago, I can remember it like it was yesterday. I haven't been back to Galveston since, I should do that again to re-charge. Hugs, John
Ajmal Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 4:46 AM
Ahh such a relaxing and wonderful place this is, you have put some of the great imagery in it and I sure want to be in that place, good luck and have a really nice day
Gondolf Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 6:13 AM
Thanks, Faraz, I appreciate it.
Onclaud Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 11:02 AM
your splendid poem brings joy and pure relaxation... really good one, john..huggs
Gondolf Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 9:39 PM
Thank you so much, Nette, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Fisher Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 11:40 PM
Beautiful. I want to be on that island!
Gondolf Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 8:12 AM
Thank you, Haley, I'm glad you enjoyed my vacation poem. John
Horsman Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Love your Poem John, takes one there, Harry.
Gondolf Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 5:02 PM
Thanks, Harry, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Y. Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 7:04 PM
Hi John, You have painted such a lovely picture with words. I would enjoy a vacation such as this. I enjoyed the peaceful tone and vibe of this write. Excellent job:-)Alexis
Gondolf Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 9:17 PM
Hi Alexis, I really enjoyed my vacation but it went by way too fast. Thanks for your comments. John
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Very nice, JOhn. My vacay is almost finished and I HATE that. I am using it to catch up on stuff and it's simply impossible to do!!
Gondolf Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 2:59 PM
I know what you mean, my vacation ended yesterday; it was far too short. I should have been a teacher... ;) John
Palli Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 5:09 AM
Beautiful! I felt and imagined the scene! Thanks,John
Gondolf Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 6:19 AM
Thank you so much, Susan, I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for taking the time to read my poetry. John
Man Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 10:42 PM
John.. I need that day!!
Gondolf Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 4:12 AM
Thanks, Lyric Man, my vacation is over, it’s back to work today. John
Nicole Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 5:00 PM
Such beautiful images you paint with your words. You are right, if you close your eyes, you can always be in that moment again. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Thank you for the wonderful comment, Brandy, I appreciate it. John
Cunningham Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 10:22 AM
What a beautiful image you have created in your verse John. I'm actually living it,in Turkey at the moment. 40•c I'm melting lol.
Gondolf Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 10:30 AM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate it. We just got back from vacation yesterday. They are always too short... John
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