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Summer trilogy

Buzzing bees pollen covered bee flits from flower to flower nature's matchmaker Camping frogs croaking in base crickets chirping in tenor camp with nature's band Midnight swim reflecting moonlight lunar cool lake shadows dance dappling your sweet face

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Date: 7/2/2024 6:41:00 AM
All the three are excellent. I am really charmed. Just one advice : According to new rule , title should be also in small letters. Blessings. Have Good Days
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/2/2024 12:15:00 PM
Thank you! I'm so glad to see you Anisha! What a beautiful name. Ty for advice, but these are just for me not for contest. I chose one to enter, called, Mojave. I'll come by soon to see your poetry! Xo
Date: 6/27/2024 11:35:00 AM
Three wonderful haiku Crystol.. I like how you created imagery here and great choice of words..
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/27/2024 12:11:00 PM
Hey MR Silent One! ;) YOUR VISIT MAKES MY DAY! xo
Date: 6/27/2024 10:44:00 AM
Indeed, pollen is nature’s matchmaker! Nice ending for camping and Midnight swim. Delightful imagery!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/27/2024 12:10:00 PM
Heehee...I liked that line. Tysm for letting me know how these worked for you! Xo
Date: 6/27/2024 10:29:00 AM
Hello Crystol, You thumbed up Summer very well. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/ Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/28/2024 10:39:00 AM
Hello Crystol, summer is my favorite season. i wish it was a longer season instead of winter. Thank you. Hugs. xo /Darlene/
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/27/2024 12:09:00 PM
Ty Darlene! So glad you came by! Xo
Date: 6/27/2024 9:09:00 AM
crystol, very nice haiku lines especially the first one...keep them coming!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/27/2024 12:08:00 PM
So nice of you to take time to say! I'll sure try! ;)xo
Date: 6/27/2024 9:08:00 AM
Ah, the very best in summer!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/27/2024 12:08:00 PM
Yess! Agreed...ty for stopping by David xo
Date: 6/27/2024 8:59:00 AM
Very creative haikus
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/27/2024 9:03:00 AM
Ty! Appreciate your comment!xo

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