Crystol Woods Poet Haiku

Summer trilogy

Buzzing bees

pollen covered bee
flits from flower to flower
nature's matchmaker

Camping

frogs croaking in base
crickets chirping in tenor
camp with nature's band


Midnight swim

reflecting moonlight
lunar cool lake shadows dance
dappling your sweet face

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Anisha Dutta July 2, 2024 at 6:41 AM All the three are excellent. I am really charmed. Just one advice : According to new rule , title should be also in small letters. Blessings. Have Good Days Crystol Woods July 2, 2024 at 12:15 PM Thank you! I'm so glad to see you Anisha! What a beautiful name. Ty for advice, but these are just for me not for contest. I chose one to enter, called, Mojave. I'll come by soon to see your poetry! Xo

Silent One June 27, 2024 at 11:35 AM Three wonderful haiku Crystol.. I like how you created imagery here and great choice of words.. Crystol Woods June 27, 2024 at 12:11 PM Hey MR Silent One! ;) YOUR VISIT MAKES MY DAY! xo

Kim Rodrigues June 27, 2024 at 10:44 AM Indeed, pollen is nature’s matchmaker! Nice ending for camping and Midnight swim. Delightful imagery! Crystol Woods June 27, 2024 at 12:10 PM Heehee...I liked that line. Tysm for letting me know how these worked for you! Xo

Darlene De Beaulieu June 27, 2024 at 10:29 AM Hello Crystol, You thumbed up Summer very well. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/ Hugs. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu June 28, 2024 at 10:39 AM Hello Crystol, summer is my favorite season. i wish it was a longer season instead of winter. Thank you. Hugs. xo /Darlene/ Crystol Woods June 27, 2024 at 12:09 PM Ty Darlene! So glad you came by! Xo

Nette Onclaud June 27, 2024 at 9:09 AM crystol, very nice haiku lines especially the first one...keep them coming! Crystol Woods June 27, 2024 at 12:08 PM So nice of you to take time to say! I'll sure try! ;)xo

David Crandall June 27, 2024 at 9:08 AM Ah, the very best in summer! Crystol Woods June 27, 2024 at 12:08 PM Yess! Agreed...ty for stopping by David xo

Karen Croft June 27, 2024 at 8:59 AM Very creative haikus Crystol Woods June 27, 2024 at 9:03 AM Ty! Appreciate your comment!xo