Summer Time Thrill

Rain is so refreshing.
on a real hot summer day.
I like to dance and sing.
all my cares away.

I splash and I splish.
and I jump and I run.
I pretend I'm a fish.
It 's great summer fun.

mud is dripping from my feet.
my clothes are saturated.
playing in the rain is such a treat.
That I am glad that God made it.

When the rain has ended
and the air is cooler and still.
I thank God cause he sended
me a great summer time thrill.


Written by Treasa Jarvis 7/16/2011
contest: Best rain poem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 16, 2011 at 2:22 AM
sounds like a winner...good luck! junjun
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