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Summer Time Thrill

Rain is so refreshing. on a real hot summer day. I like to dance and sing. all my cares away. I splash and I splish. and I jump and I run. I pretend I'm a fish. It 's great summer fun. mud is dripping from my feet. my clothes are saturated. playing in the rain is such a treat. That I am glad that God made it. When the rain has ended and the air is cooler and still. I thank God cause he sended me a great summer time thrill. Written by Treasa Jarvis 7/16/2011 contest: Best rain poem

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Date: 7/16/2011 2:22:00 AM
sounds like a winner...good luck! junjun
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