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Summer Time

A lake so calming-

 when frozen, now children splash.
  
  The Sun in control.

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Skat A

March 31, 2010 at 5:40 PM

Love them haikus. Ta ta

Lynette Chachere

March 31, 2010 at 4:54 PM

its so hot in some places during the season of summer. great write. i can see the imagery(: -Always&Forever Lynette

James Fraser

March 31, 2010 at 12:15 PM

Nice Haiku Gareth, lets hope summer is not far away so we can hear all the lovely sounds around a bustling lake >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 31, 2010 at 5:24 AM

Good morning Gareth, I enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry this morning. Please continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Royal Trevino

March 30, 2010 at 9:00 PM

the sun is in control alright:)

Doris Culverhouse

March 30, 2010 at 4:38 PM

sound good to me!!

Carolyn Devonshire

March 30, 2010 at 2:13 PM

That sun brings excitement to the lake, Gareth. Winter does seem to be a period of hibernation associated with more solemn moods, but summertime never fails to rejuvenate us. Indeed, we all splash like children when an inviting sun beckons. This is a terrific haiku! Love, Carolyn