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Summer time

A lake so calming- when frozen, now children splash. The Sun in control.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/31/2010 5:40:00 PM
Love them haikus. Ta ta
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Date: 3/31/2010 4:54:00 PM
its so hot in some places during the season of summer. great write. i can see the imagery(: -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/31/2010 12:15:00 PM
Nice Haiku Gareth, lets hope summer is not far away so we can hear all the lovely sounds around a bustling lake >> James
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Date: 3/31/2010 5:24:00 AM
Good morning Gareth, I enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry this morning. Please continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/30/2010 9:00:00 PM
the sun is in control alright:)
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Date: 3/30/2010 4:38:00 PM
sound good to me!!
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Date: 3/30/2010 2:13:00 PM
That sun brings excitement to the lake, Gareth. Winter does seem to be a period of hibernation associated with more solemn moods, but summertime never fails to rejuvenate us. Indeed, we all splash like children when an inviting sun beckons. This is a terrific haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/30/2010 2:04:00 PM
very nice I love the summer time loved it faleshia
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