Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Summer Time

Summer time so hot and fun                                           I love the beach and the white sand                                 We love to play under the big bright yellow sun                 Watch out for you will burn and not be tanned 


Clouds in the pretty blue sky                                                 Look there is a huge colorful bird up really high    
He is circling around and around he has my eye 


I love to swim-play in the cool fresh seawater                   Having fun-playing there are some sea otters                   Sea otters love to swim underwater 


The sand is sure hot I am off to run                                 I hope this fun will not get out of hand                             It's almost time to say bye                                               What a long day it is getting hotter   




Date Written: 7/15/2021                                                                              
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Note: Rhyme                                                                 Writing Prompt - Fragmented Spaces Poetry Contest                   Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France August 17, 2021 at 8:40 AM Paula, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt, Fragmented Spaces, using my created form. You made my form look wonderful, well done ~Constance Paula Goldsmith August 18, 2021 at 9:46 AM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in your contest. Glad you like my fun beach write. I had to rewrite a number of times. It was fun but not easy for me. Today, be blessed.........

Bhawana Pant August 13, 2021 at 11:50 PM What a great imagery of a beach!! Congratulations on your win. Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2021 at 2:51 PM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like my fun beach write. Today, be blessed.........

Sotto Poet August 13, 2021 at 11:19 AM Congratulations on your well-deserved win Paula. You deserve it with this great poem. The imagery, metaphors, and exquisite poetic lines were beautiful. Blessings Paula Goldsmith August 13, 2021 at 11:56 AM Thank You, for your note, kind words and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like my "Summer Time" fun beach. Today, be blessed......................

Marilene Evans August 13, 2021 at 10:05 AM I love to sit on the sand with the waves touching me while I watch the birds floricking or flying in the blue sky and kids playing, running under the sun. Congratulations. Paula Goldsmith August 13, 2021 at 11:54 AM Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like my beach. Today, be blessed......................

Emilia James July 29, 2021 at 1:48 AM I have many happy memories going to the beach as a child, they flashed back as I read your wonderful poem. Emilia. Paula Goldsmith August 13, 2021 at 8:26 AM Thank You, for your note. Glad you have happy memories about the beach. I do also. Some of my best times. Have a blessed day..............

Rama Balasubramanian July 16, 2021 at 11:16 AM You perfectly captured a beach scene. All the best for contest Paula Goldsmith July 16, 2021 at 1:17 PM Thank You, for your note and for your best in the contest. Glad you like this fun beach write. I sure wish I was walking on the sand. Oh well, I can wish. Have a blessed day............

Regina Mcintosh July 16, 2021 at 9:46 AM I haven't been to the shore in many years. It's beautiful and peaceful. I would like to see it again before I die :) God bless you always, Love, Gina Paula Goldsmith July 16, 2021 at 1:14 PM Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this one. The beach makes me very happy. I wish I lived near one. I wonder if there is one in heaven. I sure hope so. Have a blessed day..............

Mystic Rose Rose July 16, 2021 at 8:24 AM Beautiful words expressed, I enjoyed reading your poetry today :) Paula Goldsmith July 16, 2021 at 1:11 PM Thank You, for your note. Glad you enjoyed reading this. That makes me happy. Have a blessed day..............

Arturo Michael July 15, 2021 at 3:00 PM I can see you there...You'll get burn... A bright one. Paula Goldsmith July 16, 2021 at 1:10 PM Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this Summer one. I will not burn. I will stay out of the sun. Have a blessed day..............

Tom Cunningham July 15, 2021 at 2:13 PM The season everyone loves Paula, captured well in your verse. Best of luck Tom Paula Goldsmith July 16, 2021 at 1:09 PM Thank You, for your note and for your best of luck. Glad you like this Summer Time write. Yes, we all like this fun time of the year. Have a blessed day............

Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2021 at 2:00 PM - Summer is short in Norway, Paula ... I have not been to the beach yet ... too cold ... windy and rain :) - A lovely poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith July 16, 2021 at 1:06 PM Thank You, for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like this fun one. Cold, windy and rain sounds like winter not summer. Stay warm/dry. Have a blessed day............

Sotto Poet July 15, 2021 at 12:32 PM Great poem Paula, nature is always a heal for the mind and spirit. You perfectly followed the contest direction, but please try to edit the two lines verses. There should be no space between the lines—best wishes for the contest. Paula Goldsmith July 15, 2021 at 12:48 PM Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this one. I have tried to edit what is wrong. It looks right until it gets to my page then the lines are off. It does not want to change. I am trying to see what is wrong and how to fix it. Working on it. Have a blessed day.........