Summer Swimwear--- Footle

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  Beach tops
     ... Eye-drops!



Brian Strand’s  Two Lines Of Two Syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Minardi Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 7:32 AM
hahahaha, congrats :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 2:41 PM
Very creative..Congrats.Sara
Maverick Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 12:42 PM
Funny one Nette!
Brown Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's Footle contest Nette. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 9:29 PM
VERY nice, love this sexy little footle. congrats, nette.
Song Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 7:26 PM
Between the orange hips and the eyes a droppin, you have a whole new surge of success!! ha ha. You are definately a creative writing expert for sure! Thanks for teaching us so much! You rock. Gwendolen
Freeman Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 9:19 AM
A pleasure Nette! To see you at the top, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored third place. Agape, Moses
Poet Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 8:15 AM
Hi Nette,Congrats on yet another big win..
Dufresne Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 4:57 PM
good one Nette. Must keep moving aloong here before my imagination and memory get the best of me...Congratulations on your win
Devonshire Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 10:50 AM
Oh, that's a great footle, Nette. Swimsuit season is upon us and a lot of eyes are popping out as the teens stroll the beach in their bikinis. Congratulations on your big win in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 10:16 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian strand, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 9:09 AM
Congrats Nette luv on this big win in Brian's contest with a piece I so luv ..my friend.. enjoy and help me celebrate my super special day..
Seraphin Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 3:40 AM
* “Smile * I Could See That * Definitely * Beautiful & Beyond Beautiful Nette On Cloud. * Ow * And I Forgot to Mention * Extremely Gifted to The Point In Uniquely Rare * Kind of Like Being Atop The Beach * Spying Something Sooo Very Beautiful * Needing EyeDrops From The Burn * That's You * Your Poetic Beauty I Should Say. * Very Lovely Image * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Forever & Beyond * Sarah” *
Knop Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 7:47 AM
Yes, that's a great entry for Brian's contest Nette! All the best! Ingat ka lagi!...Gert:)
Rutherford Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 6:26 AM
Very clever Nette , we can say so much in so few words. Huggs to you too . Anne.
Brown Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 6:03 AM
What a beautiful morning. The sun is finally shining, the birds are singing, and I am sharing my day with you reading your wonderful poetry. Can't get much better then this. I hope you have a great weekend Nette. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 5:31 AM
very cool one Nette dear.. home..yeah..home..yeah.. reading this sweet poem at first login ..awesome to my eyes.. being home yeah.. but loved our trip ..it was super fantastic... good luck as soon your words will ring true on many beaches here luv.. am so looking forward to my own bikini this year..oh...
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May 19, 2011 at 7:58 PM
Nicely done, enjoyed reading it. thank you commenting on Tender Love.
Poet Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 7:33 PM
Ooops!Haha very nice.Enjoyed.
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