Summer Sunset

Summer sunset the color of Red Roza peaches Turning up memories from life's furthest reaches, Of interludes and warm sunny beaches Of love, simply love and all that it teaches.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/9/2018 3:09:00 PM

Lovely, Deborah. Congrats on your winning poem.

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/19/2018 3:45:00 PM

A beautiful poem expressed in warm imagery and emotions. Congratulation on your wonderful win. ~Susan

Silent One

Date: 2/18/2018 12:29:00 PM

Lovley poem, just a little shore Deborah.congratulations on your placement in the contest...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/18/2018 11:49:00 AM

- A piece of art from nature and your pen ... Congratulations, Deborah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Old Buck

Date: 2/15/2018 9:40:00 PM

Deborah: You're going to think I'm a "knit-picker" but I'm not. It just when you use so few words to produce such a beautify rhyme you need to spell check your "or's & of's" :o) I loved your work. Keep them coming. And thank you for sharing it with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/15/2018 1:36:00 PM

- A pretty colorful picture, Deborah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)