Summer Sunrise Illusku

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Placed First in Illustrated Haiku Challenge Poetry Contest of JCB Bru

                                       Summer Sunrise Illusku
golden dawn in view		
divine light fills the sky~
darkness fades with a sigh.
			
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                                              w  _           
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                                                  s     w   i   t   h

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2025 3:45:00 AM

Creative winning work. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/28/2025 2:54:00 PM

Picturesque, and very well done. A worthy entry.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 8/29/2025 11:51:00 AM

Thank you poetess for appreciating the above write. Wishing you a pleasant shining day.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/28/2025 10:09:00 AM

- Illustration of all the lines ... wonderful, Krishnanand :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 8/29/2025 11:54:00 AM

Thank you friend for appreciating the above write and for your kind wishes. Sending you wishes for a shining day filled with blessings.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/28/2025 9:10:00 AM

Luminous visions, intriguing structure, and an adventure that awakens the emotions. Congrats on your win, Krish

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 8/29/2025 11:57:00 AM

Thank you poet friend for appreciating the write and your kind wishes. Sending you wishes for a shining forthcoming weekend filled with blessings of light.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2025 8:33:00 AM

Very cool. I like how darkness is the underside of sunrise. Congratulations

Valsa George

Date: 8/15/2025 9:03:00 PM

You are adept at doing illustrative haikus. Lovely haiku and beautiful graphic representation. All the Best.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 8/29/2025 12:04:00 PM

Thank you Valsa for appreciating the above write and for your kind wishes. Sending you wishes for a shining day filled with the blessings of divine light.