Summer Sun In My Garden

Cherry tomatoes, 
Red plums,
Delicious apples,
Purple plums, 
Red grapes, green grapes,
Oranges.
In my garden they grow!
Roses,
Bougainvillea,
Sunflowers,
Lavender,
Orange lilies,
Readily their blossom show!
Gentle faces,  
Aromatic fragrance, 
Cheerful colors, 
Elegantly Display their radiation 
In the summer sun!

#Garden
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September 7, 2016 at 1:25 PM
MIRIAM, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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September 7, 2016 at 2:03 PM
Hi, Linda, I learned poem by reading them to my students in my first 15 years of teaching before doing administration for 10. I taught them some poem forms. But I am coming back to learn more about writing poem. So far, I am writing free forms for fun. Please refer to my response to SKAT about myself. :-)
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September 3, 2016 at 8:35 PM
Miriam, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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September 7, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Hi SkAT, Thank you for the welcome. I am a retired school district administrator. I like writing, taking picture, gardening, drawing, painting, and yes, reading,and traveling. We have at least 15 years of travel pictures. Thanks again for the welcome.
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August 31, 2016 at 7:30 PM
Your garden sounds so colourful with its beautiful flowers and bursting with wonderful produce - really enjoyed your poem Miriam and welcome to soup:-) hugs Jan xx
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September 1, 2016 at 12:25 AM
I would like to post all the pictures that go with the poem, but have to wait. Thank you for the welcome.
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August 31, 2016 at 6:05 PM
This is my first poem on Poetry Soup. Your comments are very much appreciated.
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