Sara Chansarkar Poet Tanka

Summer Sun

Kids tucked in their beds
Moon peering from the backstage
Lingering longer
Taking in the Earth’s beauty
Summer sun leaves grudgingly 

Written on 08/02/2016
Contest:'One Nature Tanka' by Rick Parise

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Charlie Smith August 5, 2016 at 7:24 AM Congratulations on your high placement Sara...

Sandra Haight August 4, 2016 at 10:37 PM Sara, congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Lovely imagery in your nature Tanka. Hugs, Sandra

Alexis Y. August 4, 2016 at 9:39 PM Hi Sara, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis

Jan Allison August 4, 2016 at 6:54 PM very beautiful Sara congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith August 4, 2016 at 6:08 PM wonderful Sara...congrats on the win

Laura Leiser August 4, 2016 at 5:43 PM Enjoyed this creative tanka, Sara, Congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2016 at 5:27 PM So cute!!!Congrats for your win.