Summer Sun

"Do you think a glass window
allays my love for you?
Come, embrace me!"
                  - The hot summer  Sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 10:16 AM
Beautiful piece - short and sweetly romantic! Love it! Hugs. Pandita
Sands Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 10:36 AM
This is great. I love it :)
Downing  Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 6:32 PM
It's such a delightful piece. I sure love it too! Hugs :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 12:27 PM
That was very unique. Loved the ending from the sun!!!
Callus Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 2:13 PM
I am in no doubt that the sun and you have a very close and loving relationship, Supraja! Enjoy this lovely moment...but watch out for betrayal! ~ Regards // paul
Trifiatis Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 2:08 PM
How lovely dearest, Supraja! Much enjoyed!
Pandit Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Excellent poem Supraja, adorned with your urging words.
Allison Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 8:14 AM
delightful poem Supraja, I wish the sun would embrace me but all I see out of the window today is rain!:-( hugs jan xx
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