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Summer Sun

"Do you think a glass window allays my love for you? Come, embrace me!" - The hot summer Sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/7/2018 10:16:00 AM
Beautiful piece - short and sweetly romantic! Love it! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/5/2018 10:36:00 AM
This is great. I love it :)
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Date: 4/8/2018 6:32:00 PM
It's such a delightful piece. I sure love it too! Hugs :)
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Date: 4/8/2018 12:27:00 PM
That was very unique. Loved the ending from the sun!!!
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Date: 4/6/2018 2:13:00 PM
I am in no doubt that the sun and you have a very close and loving relationship, Supraja! Enjoy this lovely moment...but watch out for betrayal! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/6/2018 2:08:00 PM
How lovely dearest, Supraja! Much enjoyed!
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Date: 4/6/2018 12:43:00 PM
Excellent poem Supraja, adorned with your urging words.
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Date: 4/6/2018 8:14:00 AM
delightful poem Supraja, I wish the sun would embrace me but all I see out of the window today is rain!:-( hugs jan xx
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